aw cloud is so sweet to aerith ^^...update soon :]

Are you still going to finish this? Because I really like the story.
It's very interesting.

Well, I hope you finish more.

With all due respect,

Cali

Super-awesomest-story-EVER!

x3 I luff Cloud and Aerith!

lol no but i came close to dying haha.

man a decade huh? I guess i can wait that long :P


I really like this chapter, it was nice. Surprised that Tifa took it in pretty good, lol would have expected some action.


Update soon (maybe in a year, hopefully :P)

Aww! How sweet! Cleris is such a cute couple. And it was the intended true couple of the game. The scene in front of the highwind with Tifa was an optional affair cause there's 1 where they're intimate and another where they're not...but not so with Aeris. Plus she was the only 1 that was able to make him laugh. Not to mention in Kingdom Hearts(?) AERIS was Cloud's LIGHT. Says alot to me! I guess Tifa/Cloud is more popular for the simple fact that Aeris had died. So can't fault Clifa fans for that. :P

Ahem. Sorry for rambling. Tifa was a good sport in this chapter, so that's cool. At first I fig she would try to pursuade him otherwise. I'm still a lil wary of her staying there at the house tho. Won't be surprised if there's some drama or tension. XD

Woohoo you've updated :D I love this story, but like Yuffie I was hoping for some Tifa/Aerith drama.. KIDDING. ^_^ Or am I? Who knows. Anyways I enjoyed it, the new part has made me want to read it in full again. Keep up the great work.

Yay and update! I hope there will be more conflict in the next chapter or any chapter to follow! Keep it up.

Princess~

Okay, so... I don't know if anybody has said anything about this, but... This is a pretty heavy-handed and exploitive portrayal of domestic violence. It's a very complex subject and the way you're treating it is actually pretty vulgar... especially since you know from right off the bat that the point is really just so that Aeris can be rescued by Cloud later on.

I can see that you know -something- about abuse, but your portrayal of the situation is still completely unrealistic and seems to be handled with very little respect. I'm not telling you to stop writing your story or anything, but please consider doing some reading or talk to some people before you approach this issue again.

Total cuteness! :D

First off, let me tell you how glad I am to be reading this again! But I can definitely relate to all the busy-ness that you must be experiencing with school and stuff...

Anyway, did I mention that I adore Yuffie in this? She's quite the character. So fun!

While I was hoping for a little more drama between Tifa, Cloud, and Aeris, (and a little more confusion on Cloud's part) I wasn't completely dissatisfied. Something tells me that it isn't quite settled yet... Hmm...

And then, of course, there's the whole Sephiroth matter to attend to! ^ ^ Will be waiting for more~!

K-9 Style (formerly Xkeeping.faythX)

Heh, wouldn't have expected Tifa to bring them together. Wasn't expecting her to drive a wedge either, but you know.

Oh my lord. This story is so intense and really fricken awesome, Im just wonering how come you suddenly stopped puting up chapters. This story is Tifariffic. Okay so... not really because Tifa hasnt even been in this but I just love the plot, sephiroth's aggressive nature, poor aeris's problems and clouds weird and dull emotional dillemma. Can't wait for more!

I know it's going to take you forever to update, but get your bum in gear! I almost stopped checking on this story, until my friend said you had updated! So update more dangit!

Oh my god!! you have to update soon, that cliff-hanger is a killer.

Poor troubled Aeris. :(

And Tifa's here?? ONOZ!

Cloud and Yuffie are a funny pair. XD

Keep up your usual good work, Beeria. :)