Short. Worth it? Yes! Loved the simplicity of the story but the lavashing descriptive words. Really, very nice. And when I say nice, like a smooth "nice." Mugen and Fuu are one of my fav's. Great work! Hope to see more!

This is very good. Ilike the whole red thing, very interesting. Good to see you out and about! And yes, Fuu & Mug forever! XD

Wo SUGOII! You've captured one heck of an interesting Fuugen take with this fic! Wee, I loved it. The fact that it was so poetic also helped a lot, it made things more... idillic XP

I didn't review the other fic because I'm not a big lemon reader, but upto the part before the lemon started I read it and I loved it. But I think it would use another chapter to tie things up a little... (besides it was too good to leave it there...! T_T)

See ya around, write some more Fuugen because you're awesome! *_*!

aw...its true though, like fuu notices him but then when he wants her to notice, doesn't. argh!

love love love!

That was beautiful and very intense. all I could see in my thoughts were a sea of red and flashes of skin and lips and metal. Wonderful imagery.

It's not a load of crap! I enjoyed reading it.

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