Great story! I want to read this! Please update soon! God bless!

Omg I was gonna review this yesterday but there was something wrong in the site...hmm. NEwayz update soon! I want to know how this will turn out! :)

Heplful criticism:
If you start a story like this, you should at least type the chapter up before submitting an intro, K? Now back to your profile. I (the reader) have almost lost intrest. Please keep it; I know you're good.

Continue and lets see the plot evolve with your belief...go dude! Hope you still have the self-esteem to continue with this cause i kinda lost mine to write or am i just lazy and too occupied? Anywayz...whatever makes you happy^^ God bless!