Why is my favorite part Fushigidane's and Pikachu's conversation? Hm.

This made me sad, so good job with inspiring proper feelings in the reader goddammit. :(

See, this is EXACTLY why I hate Ash.

Pikachu! Run away! RUN AWAY!

...Ironically, I was just watching a special on religious cults, haha. BRAINWASHING. :3

This was really nicely done, though. Awesomely awesome.

I've never thought about how the Pokemon would feel about human relationships.

I love this! I cannot wait to read your other fics. Just two quick questions, since you're using Japanese names for the Pokemon and their trainers, who are the two Pokemon at the end, Fushigidane and Zenigame ? ... o, and the Document Editor must have messed up your attempts to put an accent on Pokemon in the first few sentences.

This is very insightful.

I kinda disagree. Ash would NEVER do that to Pikachu. Pikachu is his best friend.

But it's okay, I guess.

Why are all of your Pokemon stories so depressing?

Midako: *Sniff* oh, god... why? WHY must you torture me so...? *sob* It's not fair... poor Pikachû... *sniff* WAH! I'll be your friend, Pika-chan! *glomps*

Midako's little brother: ... That's right. that's my sister, the cryb-

M: *glare*

MLB: Ehh... right...

M: *continues crying*

Midako and company

Oh. My. God.

I cannot find the right words to express my love for your writing. All I have and and will ever have to say about your work is praise. I swear I'll never speak again to anyone who flames you.

Poor Pikachu! That was a great fic...

That's so sad. ;; It's my favorite fic, too.

Poor Pikachu, I know how he feels 6_6

_ heh, you reviewed my dachshund poem and I wanted to chat with you over e mail, but this was the only way to contact you since your e mail is private ; I figured when i saw the ;_; face that you were at least familiar with anime, I'm a big anime fan too, and kudos for having a dachshund too! E mail me (the addy's in my profile) and we'll talk ok? _

Zenigame is my favorite;.;! I did'nt even know he gets given away;.;!

Satoshi sure does go though Pokemon quick for someone who loves them...

Poor Pickachu! I hope he never gets given away...

(sniff) poor pikachu...nice plot!

What a sad little story! I was crying! Poor Pikachu!

Wow... a *very* unique story. A genius idea and superb writing. Pika's view of Satoshi at the beginning was so kawaii _... the ending was kind of sad, but I'm sure Satoshi would still be heartbroken if anything ever happened to Pika. Great work, Arei!

Aww, that's so sad. Poor Pikachu. I like how you used the Japanese names of the characters and Pokemon in this fic. _ I love Fushigidane and Zenigame. Now that I think about it, they *were* pretty good friends weren't they? It sucked when Satoshi gave Zenigame away. He's always giving away his Pokemon! Poor, poor Pikachu. You wrote this really well, and really got into the character. Good work. _