i like it, its good the ties between everyone shows well. is there another chapter?

is there more to this story under a different heading cause i'd like to know what happens next. i'm enjoying it.

Interesting. I found Lucivar's explanation a little difficult to follow though. I am curious to see where you are going with this and to read more.

your story is a bit hard to understand...kinda like your thoughts came faster than you typed...but it's good. please update soon

oh wow i love this story, it is very interesting...I love it! You have to update soon or...or...*looks around for a threat* *steals Surreal's stilleto* OR I WILL DO SOMETING WITH THIS SHARP POINTY OBJECT! xp

fascinating angles are starting to appear and I'm wondering just where you'll take them with great anticipation! I've started what will probably become a pair of fics playing on openings and concepts from the BJT series which I plan to post after I finish Predators' Dance, so I'm doubly interested to see where your experiments will take you and this fic. The Web on the body is highly interesting... I look forward to more!

~*Erkith*~

PS. thank you for the dedication, it's always a joy to read your work

Are you going to make Diana end up with Lucivar?

Oh yeay! A new chapter! It's like christmas early!
lol, jk. But I am exited to see the new chapter and can't wait to see what you do next!

Oh, fascinating developments. And I like how you've got the blood as a web medium - that makes sense.

Heheh. In other news, I think my computer likes your story. I had 4 emails telling me you'd updated, all from So I figured I'd better check it out xD

so, are you planning to continue this?
because i would desperately want to know what happens next.

More please? This sounds intriguing

Great job. Can't wait to read more.

Wow... Doesn't she know she's in Kaeleer where the Queens are kind? Hmm also Daemon might be over reacting 'cause she has Ebon-Gray jewels. I mean he's probably seen a lot of liter jeweled broken people and not so many darker jeweled people, exspecially Ebon-Gray. Huh. Well this story looks really good so far. Try to update soon.

Hey! The first chapter was amazing! I'm really exited to see what you do next. Bu' bye!

Stumbled upon this, recognized your name, and am very glad I did. Fic sounds extremely interesting!

Looking forward to more,

~*Erkith*~