aw that was good.

that was so sweet.

this was great in a weird incesty way !
cool though :)
xo

Love it. Love love love it.

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Love the story!!..hahaha,finally Peter told Nathan to ·%&* off...Really sweet Paire story...XD

Wow, Nathan was a real prick here. Glad Peter stood up to him and told him so.

-Ellie

This is so cute! It's too bad they ended up being related... >_< They would have made a good couple. I liked this story. At first, I thought it took place after the episode their relation was revealed and I was like, "No wonder Nathan's not happy..." It turned out very good.

O.M.Ge. That was so flippin' sweet.

I might just have to visit my dentist now, because I'm sure I've got a cavity from all of the cute fluffyness.


Well written, too.

I liked this - good writing, good dialogue, and sweet ending. Nice job!

e! oh my word, loved it loved it loved it loved it! that was amazing!! go peter!! that's right, man, you tell that jerk of a brother off! haha! suck on THAT nathan!

hehee! loved it - did i say that already? yes? oh well, it's true though!! lol

I love this so much. I can completely see Nathan reacting like this. For some reason, I really liked Nathan thinking about how naive Peter is. And I just love how resolute Peter is in staying with Claire. Makes my Paire-shipping heart flutter.

Love this -- it was cute!

Pretty good. One of the better argument scenes I have seen between Peter and Nathan. Hope to see more writing from you soon.

They are just too cute together, aren't they? Another good one, thanks!

Cute! Nathan reacted exactly like I thought he would. Good job!