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| The Confused One 2007-02-26 ch 6,  | abuseAww. :) SO sweet. Ended perfectly. I love it. :D Fabulous work. I'm so happy they figured it out. God, I hate the angst and tension...LOL Beautiful work. :) |
| Eienvine 2007-01-25 ch 6, | abuseSo cute! I loved it! |
| Spaceape 2007-01-18 ch 6, | abusevery nice :D I like it when they kiss and make up :D it's alwyas sweet :D :D great story! loved scott lol Space |
| Secret Phoenix 679 2007-01-14 ch 6, | abuseExcellent end:D Cant wait to read more of 'family getaway' :D |
| sky m 2007-01-14 ch 6, | abuseI love your writing style and this was another nice fic, but you got me confused during this one. Alex takes a major mind-leap there in chapter 5, from Bobby opening up on his mom in ch 4, holding hands in ch 5 and then Alex saying he doesn't trust her in the end of ch 5... it's too much for my imagination on those two, I'm curious why you felt the need for Alex to make that leap. The end was nice and fluffy (though one more chapter would have been good for me and coming from you never pointless :-)) thanks for posting! I can't wait for the next chapter of Family Getaway |
| BookWorm37 2007-01-14 ch 6, | abuseTehe - her work in progress, eh? Nice. Wonderful job. You did good with this one. Now: PLEASE get back to 'Family Getaway'. |
| Metisse 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseAdmittedly I'm no fan of a romance between the two of them on the actual show but I am absolutely enamored of well-written fan-fic. Nice one. The romantic in me loves a happy ending. :-) |
| Odakota-Rose 2007-01-14 ch 6, | abuse*grin* Yay! Happy fluffy ending. I wish we could've seen this.. |
| TriStateCopFan 2007-01-09 ch 5, | abuseOh no, don't let Alex leave him now!! Poor Bobby :-( Hopefully they'll have a nice talk and all will be ok |
| Secret Phoenix 679 2006-12-26 ch 5, | abuseAh glad to see an update :D Excellent chapter! Its good to see you writing both Alex's and Bobbys feelings and that its not one sided, that both are struggling with their partnership :D Cant wait for more :D |
| Odakota-Rose 2006-12-26 ch 5, | abuseHmm, I liked that. I always love stories where Bobby gets to interact with Alex's family, and her nephew's adorable, hehe. |
| Spaceape 2006-12-26 ch 5, | abusereally great! I loved it, but just one thing, Alex gave birth to her sister's son, not her brother's. you could change the part were bobby says that alex came to terms with giving birth to scott, then it would be ok. or you could change the in-law part. eu.. yeah that sounded very confusing but I think you got what I meant *g* Space |
| BookWorm37 2006-12-26 ch 5, | abuse...Just one minor detail: Alex gave birth to Scott for her sister, not her sister-in-law. But you can always claim it's AU and tell me to stop bugging you about things like that. Anywho - wonderful job. This chapter was a perfect way to illustrate how they're trying to get their 'groove' back, but it's not coming automatically. It's very realistic and I like it. Now, if only we can remind Dick Wolf and those damn writers that Bobby and Alex can't bounce back to normal in their next episode ... |
| BookWorm37 2006-12-26 ch 4, | abuseThat line from 'To the Bone' is coming back to me 'Everyone needs a support group'. ...sigh ... if only the chapters were a tad longer. |
| BookWorm37 2006-12-26 ch 3, | abuseOnce again: Wow. The way you're blending the plot and the sensory detail is ... brillant. Superb. Among the best I've read in a LONG time. |