wow, that was very good!

That was so sweet...you should do another

once again za masterful Quig has amazed me, your brillant!*bows, bows, praise, praise* and no i probably wont get tired of these type stories, i have a soft spot. Vash's eye like to hempnotize meryl don't they, tee hee.

ment to say this last time'

Meryl swoons over Vash a lot dosen't she *swoon swoon

Wow! Very nice! I'm very glad I came to this story first. I'm sorry I wasn't able to review last night. My family got home at past midnight and was busy for a long time. I hope to be able to review a lot now that I have the time.

This story was extremely well written. I just wanted to huggle Vash forever, poor guy! Your writing style is smooth and emotive, and I noticed nothing at all wrong besides some very minor typos and punctuation errors.

Excellent job with the recap at the beginning. I think this entire work was your story because the anime only showed it. You did an excellent job of actually putting the actions into words.

Write on!

-Alaena

I love it!11!1one!eleven!

Great stuff. Touching and true to the story.

Omg...;_;

This story made me cry, it was just beautiful...

Wow!

The entire shower scene was just so sad. It broke my heart! Poor Vash...he's such a little boy.