Hey,

I thought the ending was probably the best part of the poem.

Da-da-chum?

The Lunatic is in your head? I should report you for lyric abuse, sai ;)

Actually, I really like this. That small reference being only one reason. The double repeats make it flow so well, and the last stanza is wonderful. Lobstrosity (sp?) noises should make a debut in every poem.

Wow. That's a nice poem. Sweet job!

omg I love it! Great job ^_^

cool
i havent read the dark tower series, but it is next on my list

Oh wow! Great poem!