|Reviews for Life and Death: the King in Danger|
| Lamppostshines 8/18/07 . chapter 2
Okay, so I used to write like this so I know...about those other reviews. Later
| Feafea 12/2/06 . chapter 4
juz a curious question, how old are you? you need not tell mi your exact age if you feel uneasy to. juz a rough gage. though i dont suppose you are more than 12 right? if so, not a bad fic! practice makes perfect.
| Sarahbarr17 12/2/06 . chapter 2
I am enjoying this story very much, but there are a few things that are anachronistic about this chapter:
1. "she looked at the time and it was 4.30 in the morning"? It sounds like arwen has a digital clock. They didn't express time like this in Middle Earth.
2. "Hey, what's up?" - this is modern language.