aw! i love it!!

DONT STOP THERE~! this would be a super duper zutara fic! i wasnt really intending to read this fic since i read that katara might've comited suicide, but im glad i did! c'mon, you have to comtinue this! im also really glad aang doesnt like katara anymore... kataang is seriously getting on my nerves. no offense all you kataang lovers out there. Im also puting this on story alert just in case you decide to make this a story or at least a two-shot!

Erin

Aw don't make it a oneshot! You should coninue this! I'm adding you to story alert just incase you change your mind =]

I don't know, this story had a lot potential to be good for me initially, but I think the end was too abrupt for me to really like it. I think this story could have been perfect if you had shown Zuko talking about his father, the reason he betrayed Iroh, and why Katara forgave Zuko enough to invite him to along to help Aang, instead of just saying that these things happened in the last two lines of the story. I was also a little confused about when and where this was happening; it was a little difficult to tell exactly which part of the finale you kept in this story and which parts you changed. Still, it was a pretty good story. I liked it.

This is how it should have end! Good job!