great story

I just read the first chapter and its really good :D:D Ooo I cant wait to read the next one :D:D

this is kinda sad

What a beautiful story! Please write more!

Interesting start. One thing I would do is translate all of the french, for those of use who don't speak or read it. I like it though, very much!

I like this story, write more!

Cool, I like it. It's an interesting idea.

I liked this part very much, too! :-) I think it's cool that Deanna adopted Quinn and it's funny to imagine how Jean-Luc would act around a child. Off to look for more parts! I'm glad to hear you're going to be writing more. I sure hope Will gets used to the idea!

I liked this first part a lot! Good job. I looked through all the other stories after this but didn't see a sequel, although I wasn't looking for it. I do hope there are more parts to it though.

Danielle :-)

I enjoyed the story .. except the child is four. A four year old would not accept losing her parents so easily, and the story would be better if you made it harder for Deanna and the Quinn to relate. Good story but needs some reality work

this is adorable. I can't wait for more!