Awesome character stoy about Magneto.

Would you allow me to translate this for a German fanfiction site?

Of course you would be mentioned as the author.

I don't remember Lee, but this story was truly astounding. I'm a rabid X-Men fan, and truly enjoy stories concerning the fascinating team

Wearing the same expression of bewilderment, Kurt turned to Logan. "There's no Magneto attached to her hip. Is this healthy?"

Alara, quit giving me gigglefits in the library with lines like this? :)

This was well done. The dialogue was well-done, and your Magneto was very well-written. I also enjoyed your Kurt and Logan.

You have excellent insight into this particular time in the x-men timeline.

Very well done. :)

A touching story. Makes me wish that Eric could have stayed on the strait and narrow with a woman he loved. Vey three-dimensional characters.

kiragecko

Very good story. The characters were well written and the dialogue was spot on. You mixed your humor and your serious moments well. The insights were great, too. Excellent piece!

I really thought that this was a wonderful story. Magneto is one of my favorite characters, nice to see him written in a kinder light rather than having him be a raving lunatic.