CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! (i'm joking when I say this) YOU ARE ASO MEAN! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MAKE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! PLZ

Very nice chapter. I'm really enjoying this story. Nice chapter, very nice.

Ok, I just need to say this. I don't think that Morzan would be sorry, and called Murtagh "his little Murtagh" or whatever you wrote. I don't think he'd be sorry. But that's not my jkudgement to make. It's your sorry and you can write what you want. Very very very very awesome awesome awesome awesome chapter. Keep on writing!!

That was beautiful. So, so beautiful And thank you for making a story about Murtagh, he's so much better than Eragon. Everyone always cares and makes stories about Eragon, but then people, people like you, make stories dedicated to the amazingly awesome Murtagh. Just saying, it's not bad to make stories all about Eragon, but we need a change once in a while. Anyway, as I said before, awesome chapter. Beautiful and awesome.

This looks good so far. I can't wait to continue

nice chappie keep it up

:O must you... you just must update!! son

Hi!this story is really good!Please update soon!

wow this is god keep updating!

Chapter 3 please1!

Interesting, very interesting!
I'd like to hear more about M's childhood, how he felt, what he did. This chapter is really good, though a bit on the short side. ;D Awesome work!

Very good. Interesting plot. I would like to bring up the fact that if it was 17 years later Murtagh would be 20 not 17. Also the chapters are a little to short, but this story is still very good.

"Muscular arms..."
M, yum yum yum!!
I love Murtagh, hez just the best (and so dreamy to add to it!!)
This story is GREAT!! Keep writing!

~ * TheDragonRider * ~

Aww! So sweet and sad! This is a brilliant story idea, I've never seen one about M. before. Great chapter!
I loveh Durza!

aw. poor cute murtagh. update soon