Wow, I just happened to be listening to pink-crystal ball, a sad song in itself, when I began reading your poem. Beautifully written! I have never shed a tear while reading, but I guess the combination of the song and Padme's emotionally charged monologue sent me over the edge. I was really hoping that no one would come in the room and see my watery eyes, I would never have lived that down! I don't generally enjoy poetry, I may rethink my position after reading this, thanks.

This is so great, never read one like it!!

I really love the POV of Padme. It really moved me deeply!

Okay, interesting premise. "a dead ghost"..as opposed to, an alive ghost?

As I told you on MSN, it's a beautiful poem. I loved every part of it. :)

That was deep, loved it.

B R A A A A A A V O!

I LOVED IT! :)