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| anteffy1 2008-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseI can't say a single bad thing about this--I think you did an excellent job!! |
| sweetiepie1019 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! It was cute - a little dramatic, a little cliche, but cute. And the lines of poetry added a nice touch. Seriously, don't you feel like half the episodes are just missing all these Hodgela scenes? Especially the last one - Angela just fogave Hodgins? Sorry, my issues. Anyway, well written, good voice. I enjoyed it. |
| ladybrin 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseYou really did a marvelous job with angie and hodgie-Hope you write another one real soon=- looks like they are getting quite cosy on the show- hahaha |
| Fanwoman 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI like how you worked in the metaphor of the cliff and didn't forget about Kirk. |
| DianaoftheCrossways 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful. Poetry, if ill-used, can really damage a story but yours fits in amazingly well. I almost cried. The only thing I woul suggest is that you either maintain present or past tense. The mix is rather confusing, but overall, amazing story. |
| pixie88 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abusevery nicely done. i loved the insight into angela's character, and the notes from hodgins- i can definitely see that happening. thanks so much for sharing! looking forward to seeing more of your work :o) |
| avaleighfitzgerald 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely wonderful, I loved this little character study of Angela, the idea of all the notes is such a great one, it works so well for the characters. Also the lines of poetry that you used fit very very well. Loved it! Ava |
| willowwood 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really amazing. Loved it so very much. |