I found a lot of philosophical truths in this chapter that I found interesting to say the least. Brought new opinions to my mind which is what a story needs to do to its readers. Another great chapter.

I am glad that reviews are welcomed to you since this story has an elequence in and of itself that I have found to be lacking on this site. The flow between characters perspectives is wonderful and provides an easy read as well as tantalizing details. Kudos on your great tale!

What? Did I recall you saying something about me NOT reviewing this chapter? XP

Hohoho, this chapter cleared a few things up! Like why Rachel and the rest of her gang are such douches. But seriously, I don't know if you realized it while writing it, but Peach's conversation with Sam and Zel was very... deep. In a way that wasn't "poetic" like most people think deep things to be, beingut is one of the most poignant things I've read from an author, professional or amateur.

You hit on an issue that I'm a huge advocate of, and that's judging people, jerk or not,prior to knowing them.

I was thinking about that heavily the day I read this. That means you connected with me on a personal level with what you had to say, something that renowned authors forget to do.

Just thought I'd give you credit, because you did a great job with that, and I felt obligated to let you know. :)

All that seriousness aside, I'm glad you finally had Peach open up and take the first step to putting the past behind her. I like how you've characterized Peach; she's very easy to relate to and represents the uncertainty we all feel at times.

Very nicely done. I enjoyed this lots, especially the funny moments, like Zelda after getting off Samus' motorcycle. ;)

As always, love this chapter and you,

-Sage

Great chapter. I especially like how you revealed Link's softer side when he was playing with the Kokiri, and gave us a little insight into why he is as cold as he is

I didn't see any mistakes, so that's a plus.

Update soon and keep up the amazing work.

Love,

-Sage

So sorry I haven't reviewed and read your updates sooner. Like you, my life's been a little crazy as well. I cope by listening to a LOT of Paramore. ;) But, to tell you the truth I'm just ecstatic that you're writing again; it's really refreashing. I actually did see a little bit of the cheesy writing you were talking about. But I could barely notice, so don't worry about it. Have to disagree with the Stephanie Meyer thing, though: Iread the series a year ago and loved it, so I'm a total sell-out, hahaha.

Well, this was some primo writing, regardless, so keep it up, and I hope your parents chill out and realize what an awesome and talented daughter they have, and maybe show some appreciation.

Love you always,

-Sage

Oh poor Roy! I feel so sorry for him. Peach better take him back. If she doesn't...I guess I can only wait.

Oh. My. God. You updated again! I loved the chapter and I hate you. Why the cliffhanger?! Can't wait to see what Peach is going to do though. Btw, you deserve so much more reviews then 250. Guess people don't like the pairing that much...anyway HURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT 13.4 CHAPTERS OR I WILL COME AND KILL YOU!! Just kidding. But please post soon!

Woohoo! That was another great chapter. The beginning was depressing, but in a good way. I really like how Samus is against shoe shopping. That whole scene had me laughing out loud. My sister actually called downstairs to ask what I was doing. XD

And Roy's back! I can't wait to see Peach's reaction!

Hope college is going well!
Ami

This was perhaps one of the best chapters that I've ever read, because it has to do with my one of my most favorite characters! Peachie! So now we figure out her story, in addition to Megan's, Caitlan's, and Rachel's. Wow. I still don't feel like I know the whole story, but perhaps it shall crop up later? Megan, Caitlan and Rachel's reason for dumping Peach after a friendship of NINE years better be good! Unless Megan's a brainwashing jealous psycho little beyotch... As for their backstories, I love what you did with their histories. It just proves that everybody's fighting a hard battle, and rich, beautiful people are no exception. But despite that, I still think that is no excuse for them to behave the way they do. But somebody has to be the antagonist in this story, and its gotta be them. Also the cliffhanger! ROY! YEAHYUH! I missed my little Roysie, but I wonder how Peach'll act? Hm in her new confident manner (I love the new Peach by the way! It suits her :)), I would want her to go out with him, but only Mistress BKP can tell what shall happen!

Ah on another note, Samus being a crazy driver really matches her personality. Love what you did there with the whole driving thing. Another thing that I really like is how you are paying attention to the time that is passing by. You pay attention to the seasons, something that most writers on this site could care less about. I remember previous chapters where there was fall. I'm glad your story has finally progressed to the winter! Hm I wonder what will happen in spring and summer? ;)

Alright things that bugged me were this:

Towards the end of Peach's confession, you describe her last smile as "sinister"... Does that mean Peach is evil or something? NO! PEACH CANNOT BE EVIL! But it struck me as odd. Perhaps you were searching for another word? Or is she really a reader? Erm... It just seems weird that she'd be smiling evilly right after everything that happened... Unless she knew that Samus would be PO'd by her complete turn around (The whole conversation with the shoe shopping was hilarious by the way!) Yeah there was that and this:

For some reason the end of Peach's confrontation with Zelda and Samus all of them laughing and stuff... It seemed almost like a, "the end, golden moment with the sunset and all the cliches" sort of ending. I don't want to call it sappy... But it seems like after all the drama that happened, they all became so happy. If I were Zelda or Samus or Peach, I know for a fact that I wouldn't smiling and promising that we'd be staying buds forever, though maybe I'd be feeling it. I remember when I confessed to my best friends a deep dark secret of mine, they were shocked and did not say anything for three periods (I told them during lunch) but afterward they started asking me all these questions and then finally in the end they were very supportive, but their reaction was more like, "I'm going to kill him, the next time I see him!" and "Crys, its okay. We still love you". For some reason it seems a little unrealistic to me, but perhaps it is because I am a bit more withdrawn when it comes to sharing emotionally?


Anyway, that's pretty much it! I cannot express to you how much I enjoyed this chapter BKP. I really do think it is one of the best you've written because you show that everybody is fighting a hard battle. You show that no matter how much you hate a person, you should realize that they are still PEOPLE and the things they do are usually for a reason. So I salute you for expressing that in this chapter.

-Crystalicios :)

Well! I'm so happy for Peach! So very, very happy! :D

...And I also feel slightly guilty that I still hate the girls who are my MRL club. I don't actually know anything about their private lives. Then again, we were never friends, they pretty much were jerks to me from the time we first met. Well, whatever.

D: The part about Mario makes me so sad, though...I'm a traditionalist, and to me Peach and Mario just sort of belong together forever. Tear. I can still appreciate a good Peach and Roy thing, though. So I hope Roy doesn't screw up his apology. D<

But still! Huge psychological breakthrough this chapter! Nice! Finally Peach can be, well...peachy!

iv been waiting for this chapter and i didnt even relize it was there anyways tis is so coolsometasical...dont ask

btw, wat does HS mean?

if u cant update in 1 week, try 2 make it 2 or 3 at most. i mean this storys bin going on sins 06. i really wanna read. the next chappie. so hurry! & if you miss the time limit... lets just say i HAV bin acussed of stalking ppl b4. jk, but not about the acussed of stalking part. plz hurry! btw, i think Daisy is Peachs cuzin. by!
:)

b4 u sed Samus was in Zeldas Spanish class. is she?

in brawl, Zelda actually has brown hair & eyes. u probably alredy no this, but watever. otherwise, i luv it!