Kool story.
Is Tenten really dead(tears)?
That last chapter seemed a little random but I'm hopeing/guessing it will eventually tie into the first two.

UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!

Confusing--but aren't I always confused?
Where's Tenten, I wonder? And Neji? AH the confusion!
And yet it's also suspensful.
Or wait..was that girl Tenten? Did she loose all of her memories? Or is this just me overthinking and/or giving you an idea?
Anyway, update soon! No more writer's block!

please update soon!

aw poor neji! gret start story by the way

OH THE SUSPENSE! AWESOME! XD!

I don't understand where this chapter fits into things, but I'm sure you'll explain later. Maybe Tenten isn't really dead and her body was just replaced?

OMG!! That was so sad!! All three chapters were sad! There was so much emotion, and when Neji cries, I cry! It's just not something he does! T_T

Anyways, I really like where this is going, even though it is very sad. But, I'll live. I hope you update soon, cause I really do like it!

Kratos Wilder

This story made me really sad... But it's really good anyways.

man did she really die?>! i have to doubt that but hey your the one writing the story so wat can i say! just cant wait to read more keep em' comeing>!??



~UPDATE~!

Wah! *sobs* That's sad... Update soon!

whoa, she's dead...? cool...
i mean, i love the use of words (the ones describing the blood) in this chapter. it's so real.
if this is nejiten, n tenten is dead, what's going to happen?
oh, how interesting...

it's sweet, short, and mysterious...
except, i can't imagine neji crying.
but, it's so interesting

How sad...I don't exactly get why Lee said that, however. Yeah, Neji was yelling at him, but Neji's always annoyed at him for something. I hope that the next chapter gets posted soon.

That's...so...sad...WAH! *sniffle* Okay, I'm good. I have a pretty good idea where this is going, and I can't wait to see your next chapter.

Ahh... I don't know how I can begin. :( Tenten is already dead! Where is the hope of anything happening between her and Neji? Alas... but there is still a sunshiny ray of hope? Yes? :)