This is probably my favorite of your stories. I could totally see this scene happening, and it's very sweet ^_^ Keep up the good work!

We wonder why Jade never gets drunk? Oh well, Jade helped solve Anise's problem, didn't he?

VERY in-character. I loved it. Amazing job!!

lolz These Jade and Anise fanfictions are cute! ^.^

SQUUE! Amazing! I love fatherly Jade and Anise! That's the main thing in my story so far! I can't explain how much I liked this story! The writin style and writing itself was impeccabe and the personailties were right on! It's jus too amazing! You're awesome!

Okay, you know what? THIS is now officially the REAL Chesidonia scene. I had been told before hand that the scene between Luke and Tear in Chesidonia was like the equivalent to those in Flanoir in ToS, but it was disappointing (even if the ending did make up for it...).

THIS is the cute little stuffies we wanted to see between Luke and Tear! THIS is the emotion we wanted from scene upon the Alboire! THIS is...

...well, pretty frikkin' amazing, as always.

WOnderfully cute story! I just want to hug it! The father-daughter relationship you paint in this fic is so adorable and still completely IC. The references to what Luke and Tear might be doing are funny and I can just imagine Jade chuckling to himself at the youngsters and their emotional hormones. Anise sleeping with Tokunaga is very interesting. She fights with and sleeps with for comfort a mismatched doll. If I were a shrink I'd have a fielday with that.

You do a remarkable job of pulling off the father/daughter relationship between the two... really well done.

THat was really amazing. It was so discriptive and life like, I felt as if I was actually there. I love the way that you portrayed their relationship and everyone was perfectly in character. So much so that I could imagine all of this happening in the game.

That was very descriptive! It was like you acctually took the exact personality of Jade and Anise and juxt threw it into the text, It was amazing!

Maybe it's just my obsession for Jade. . .

Nah, I'm sure. :D

I found it a cute oneshot. I think Jade's really like a subsitute father for Anise.

I hope to see more from you!

Ari-chan (Arikai) Emiya Belnada

Wow, that was a really good story! I think it might be my favorite so far, but I don't know. You're really good at making the characters act like they're supposed to, and not totally OOC like I do. Then again, I haven't had enough experience with the game. So keep it up, I really love your stories!
~ Nakoya

I have a feeling that the Author Notes was directed towards me... xP

It was the fan arts I say.. FAN ARTS D:

Uhm, moving on.

Yay! I've been basically waiting for another Fan Fiction from you Griffinkhan x)

And excellent once more =D Yay for Jade and Anise Fatherly-daughterly relationship~ :3

How nice.

Anise and Jade seem to confide in one another, not in the romantic way, but like a sort of father-daughter relationship. I liked how you highlighted this important fact, rather than working on the romantics. ^^

YC: This was just what I was in the mood for. So cute. You stull get an A for nailing everyone's character so well. I always saw Jade as a kinda fatherly figure toward Anise. This was great! *adds favs*