*pretty sure Hal has brown eyes

Very good story! So far-

Curious to see what's to come

Interesting take on his GL origin story... Almost humorous version

But pretty good story C:

Def not boring

its good, a little choppy, but good.

you should try to update faster.

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you had Clark & Hal ordan meet. Please update soon.

very good! whana reade more about it.. so please hurry up.. )