Reviews for Close Encounter

Reviews For: Close Encounter

Chibi Monkey13 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is the best Full Metal Panic fanfic I've ever read.
Tairi Soraryu 2007-12-10 ch 1,	abuseI like the additions! Good job!
Sousukes-Girl 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseI am still laughing! That was a great story. Awesome job of keeping them so in character. =)
The-Shadow002 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseHaha another great one, nice work throughout this story, no complaints on spelling or grammer, good characterisations as well and great pacing as well, loved the ending heh. Nice work.
greysky-chan 2006-12-18 ch 1,	abusecutecutecutecutecutecute! aww man, i DO feel sorry for sousuke sometimes, though... so abused laughs wickedly anyway, i love the story, you are an EXCELLENT author, of course
Meatballheadedprincess14 2006-12-15 ch 1,	abuseoh! That was so weird but EXTREMELY CUTE at the end! lol like when Kaname says, "This close encounter will do you lots of good. lol that was awesome. Sadly, I never got to finish watching Close Encounters everytime I rented it... lol I think that this was really good, for being like based off a movie and stuff. lol love Sosuke! Sorry for the randomness and for me not really making any sense... i just got back from the ER. Well, anyways... this was great! Is this like a oneshot or something or will there be more? jus' wonderin... well update soon if there's more... if not, that was a really kawaii ending! ^_^ ur a great writer, and u better believe it! ^_^
IronicEnding 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseWow, a rewrite, ok. I can dig that. Lets get on with it then. Lol, being with sousuke, a blinding light and a flashing noise...sounds like a flashbang for me. Im surprised Kaname's anger didnt get the better of her immediatly. That barrier does seem to have a little bit of a benefit on Sousuke's side. At least he wasnt getting beaten around...yet. I love how Kaname casts aside these marvelous creations such as easter island and stonehenge as nothing more than 'big rocks' it certainly adds a nice humerous effect to it all. HMm...a movie filled with romantic tension that never really got solved...sounds oddly familiar. You worked that line into the story very nicely. Unbelievable Freaking Otaku eh? Very creative use for the acronym. I applaud it! I absolutely love the way you havbe Sousuke responding to the tesnse sexual references you have had Kaname made. It feels so in touch with his character and makes Kaname look just a little bit wicked for reasing him so much. and true to Kaname fashion, you had it lead to her own insecurities abotu thier relationship. If that which didnt kill Sousuke makes him stronger, a relationship with Kaname would make him a lethal killing machine...if he already wasnt. “Indeed,” the first alien said. “By all accounts, the data we intercepted suggested that the female of the species was far more talkative, often conversing in a manner that made little sense, or was designed to overwhelm the limited mental capacities of the males.” At that line I wasnt sure if i should applaud or be a little offended from a guys standpoitn. In the end it was funny so i dont care either way. :-) I love how this fiction seems to draw upon the male female roles in relationships in true science fiction fashion. Its stating a situation in a semi-obvious way to get the point across, at the same time putting in a setting that removes any personal attachment. Seriously...whose going to get ** at an alien making comments. Kaname's interpretation of close encounters was also something that brought a laugh,yet at the same time fond memories of favorite parts of the series. Again, very nicely done. i can see the series now...Sagara in space! I like the change you made to the end of this story, eliminating that whole dream aspect that was there before. It added yet a whole new crazyh demontion the fmp universe, while at the same time it added some benefits for everyones favrote misfit sergeant. I greatly enjoy4ed this 'reread' and look forward to more fmp works by you. Until next time, take care. :-)
elianthos 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseHi, dave-sama. mmh, I remember the first version, and overall I liked that better. But the ending sequence of this one was very good, and I especially liked the conclusion ;P. I must confess I'd be very glad to read some new stories about Sousuke and Kaname's family life and kids too. I think they're among your best works (one of the many reasons being Kaname's personality improvement: sometimes - forgive the criticism - I found her to be a tad too bipolar in your high school fics. Instead both in Higher Education and in the ' Sagara family series' she acts - and is - less of a character with slapstick attacks and much more of a (although fictional) person). bows
Yin Bao Qin 2006-12-02 ch 1,	abuseI dunno... I think I liked it more the way you had it before. The story, written this way, seems overdone, and feels like it lost something in the transition. It's not that bad... but it's not as good as it was before.
langobalt 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseA much better ending than before. Nice job. I love your FMP fics, and I hope for more of them.
Tacky76 2006-12-02 ch 1,	abuseHAHAHAHA!! I like this ending better than your original one! Mithril with a UFO sounds like something to explore!

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