Aww, that was really touching! I love how passionate Sara was, and how nervous she was, but that she talked to Griss about what was important to her... great work!

This was an awesome fic. I plan on someday having children of my own but I also hope to adopt. I could really picture Sara wanting to adopt because of what she went through. Great job!

wow this was incredible it just asks for another chapter:)

Hey...I liked your little story here. I saw it posted on YTDAW and it caught my attention. I'd thought before about what it would be like if Grissom and Sara adopted a child. I think you got the converstaion pretty much completely in character.

In my personal opinion though, I'm not sure if Sara would want to follow the kind of trend that Maddonna and Angelina Jolie set of adopting children from Africa and other places. I was adopted, so I think of these things quite often. I could see Sara wanting to adopt a child from Africa for the right reasons, but would be afraid of people thinking that she was doing it for the wrong reasons [[I'm not saying that all people who adopt from foriegn countries are follwing trends or doing it for attention, I don't believe that]] and I can see Grissom and Sara adopting a local child (like I was) more than a foriegn one. And I don't thing that local Child Services are involved with overseas adoptions, but I'm not sure.

Anyway, I enjoyed your take on it, don't get me wrong. I was just sharing my personal opinion. I liked the way that you had Sara thinking about it, and how set she was in her ideas. Very Sara. Also, I liked how Grissom was a little hesitant and wanted to make his own child. You were right on with the conversations! I really liked them.

Thanks for an interesting read!(you said you wanted feedback, so here it is, lol. And no, you didn't screw it up. you handled it really well!)

-s.s.5

oh this is sweet, love it!!

That was great. You could spin it into a complete story that would be fabulous.

Really great story, but I don't think you write anything but great stories! Love how its based on a true one, really tugs at the heart strings. Amazing job!

The ending is just perfect and I love, love this story. You always seem to find fresh and original ways to write these two. Love it!

that was cute! good job!

~kate

Love the changes you made to the end, they totally work. You rock!

love the tagline...so grissom!

Really good. I can totally see Sara's heart going out to a kid in a nasty situation, and wanting to give her a better life. The conversation with Grissom was also really believable. Good job!

This was awesome! You describe Sara's feelings so well that I was bitting my own lips, my stomach hurt, and I was definitely nervous ^^
I loved the idea, it was really sweet, and really well done, and the interraction was, as always, so believable.

Great work!!

*Elialys*

Considering Sara's past..growing up in "the system", I could see how something like this would be dear to her heart. This left me with such a warm and fuzzy feeling. Then again, I adore all of your work :o)

Oh-that so works. You caught Gris/Sara just right...
and the way Gris decides to go for it...sweet!

Thanks!