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teentitanslover11
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
ok i dont have an accout so i cant vote on ur pole thing but if i could then i would volte for the sequel to power of the sea thing
teentitanslover11
2009-09-12 . chapter 11
hurry up and write the sequal!um...please? im dieing here! :)
aquaray
2009-08-27 . chapter 11
no it can't end, is it over?
kaytee115
2009-08-25 . chapter 10
okk i luv dis story! and Love The Couple! It's Amazin! hurry up and make the Sequeal!
Runnergrl1391
2009-08-05 . chapter 10
Hey this is really good! You should definitely write a sequel :)
Gin Kitsune Kijo Ansatsusha
2008-12-24 . chapter 10
That was so AWESOME!
1813
2008-11-03 . chapter 10
aw
OnexCrazyxOnna
2008-10-04 . chapter 10
I loved it... but you know what I would love even more? If there was another chapter letting me, and everyone else, know how happy they are together. That would be great.
Ishii Sen Ling
2008-09-16 . chapter 10
That was so cute! I love it! Hope you write the prologue soon! Have a nice day and thanks for writing this amazing fic!
Ishii Sen Ling
The Tygre
2008-09-15 . chapter 10
An ocean of Love

Have you ever sailed on vast ocean,
With no island to see, and things are out of reach?
With dreams and mysteries filled this ocean,
And a never ending faith that someone would teach?

Have you ever felt that feeling,
Of a deep calmness within you that's hard to fight?
And no one could help you believing,
That you're striving for the right?

Did you ever sailed on an ocean,
That further placed upon your heart?
For deeply below this ocean,
Lies a silent whisper, where love starts.

An ocean of Love, the ocean of dreams
Where you can find solace and exceptional truth
Though pain resides even if you don't dream
As the existence of love bears its fruit.

The fruit of harmony, bliss, and wonder
Without the seed that's buried down below
Like a pearl that lies down under
The ocean of love they call, starts hello.

Upon this vast ocean, two souls were me and you
Over the waves and across the surface
I have found a love so true
The ocean of love was then the wondrous place.

Lovelyn Layon

- Seemed fitting for the occasion. Bravo!
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noodlemonsters
2008-09-15 . chapter 10
I LOVE this story! I started reading it a long time ago and am glad to finally see it finished! I've always loved this couple far too much for it to be healthy.. I especially loved the part with "Charlie." It always makes me laugh! Hehehe... Anyway, I hope you write more fics soon! I can't wait! ;) Good luck in your future fic writing!
The Tygre
2008-08-31 . chapter 9
Hey! Did I say you could stop?! NO?!?! Now amuse me with this charming story of dark and aquatic young romance. It will please me...

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1813
2008-06-21 . chapter 9
aqh RAVEN! this is a cliffy which is evil but the story is good and i can forgive you
DarkRoseDevon
2008-04-12 . chapter 9
Woah...O.O Action scenes are great!
Ishii Sen Ling
2008-04-11 . chapter 9
That was awsome! I love it! Please continue as soon as you can and thanks for not forgetting your story like other authors do. Have a nice day!
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