soo...shuichi died and yuki died... right?

omg... I love your story! It's so sad, I was in tears the whole time I read it. You are a great writer!

this should be in the catagory of angst

so was he like asleep or in a coma or what?

That was so good! I LOved IT! :P

wahh!that is so sad,but good you rock!;_;

ah *cries* so beautiful. good job.

I loved it! i'll consider it a b-day present! ok? since today is my birthday and i enjoyed it so much. thats ok with you right? hehehe GREAT ENDING! well and story too...

OMFG! are you TWISTED!

that was SO sad!

-sniff- That was so sad, it left me in tears. Very very well written! There were a few spelling mistakes, but other than that I loved it. The mistakes kinda just hid there and I didn't notice them until I re-read it.

damn,this is dark!

thats like so sad.. and yet so sweet and beautiful!

good job

Kumi-chan

NO! Shu can't die! no no no! i'm so sad now...:'(...*sulks in corner* ok done...yeah i feel sorry for yuki and especially hiroshi! omg! that would tear him apart is his best buddy died...i can't even begin to think about what shu's sister would think...she'd prolly kill herself...lol ok i'm done ranting...great story! is thi sa oneshot or is it turning into more?

I'm not much of a writer and I just now started learning but I think this is one of the best oneshots I've read in a while. You have talent, don't let anyone ever take that away from you. Continue writting because it's people like you that inspired people like me to start writting. Well, anyways have a wonderful Christmas and have a Happy New Year(Yeah I know so original)! LOL

Hot damn! This will be added to my favorites now. Your writing is amazing.