Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Rain
antiIRONY
2006-12-07 . chapter 1
Cutest thing in the world. I tried reviewing for the Icecream fluff, but it wouldn't let me... maybe I already did, and just don't remember?

At any rate, I'll review it here. I have to say that that was damn sexy, and I just had to get myself a bowl of icecream.


On another note, this was really cute and sweet. And I wish my boyfriend had done something cute like that.

*sigh* Straight boys... surriously.
Rustie73
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
I love the natural feel of this piece.

This doesn’t read like fiction. There are no catchy phrases or one liners to weigh this story down. It’s simple and honest and I loved it.

You did a great job in writing Skittery. He was so focused on his mission that he seemed not to notice the rain. And I loved that you let him get half way back to his car before Specs responded. It added a lot of emotion to the piece.

Having Specs walk out into the rain after him was the icing on the cake.
Return to Top