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Reviews for: Potent Blood: Punishment
Failing Mentality
2009-06-10 . chapter 2
Throughout the the previous chapter and this chapter are inconsistencies about Daisuke's sight. Daisuke is blind, and therefore is unable to see Satoshi's bruises. There are other instances, of which made me doubt Daisuke's blindness.
killah-sama
2008-08-07 . chapter 2
Agh. Sato! Damn you for being all bruised up and tired.

You could have /totally/ had your way with Daisuke at that moment! I mean...look at the way he was dressed! Mm. :D
Liviania
2007-12-03 . chapter 2
I'm glad you've continued! . . . though I'm surprised Satoshi wasn't more surprised by Daisuke's clothing.

Livi
Nikotehfox
2007-12-01 . chapter 2
heh. Dark gets what Dark wants, eh?
Solo Maxwell-Yamato
2007-11-27 . chapter 2
: D Entertaining chapter.
moongirlSelene99
2007-01-24 . chapter 1
nice... good luck on plotting the sequel!
Liviania
2006-12-18 . chapter 1
Heh, Dark is very cruel. Though really, Daisuke could have much worse happen to him than being forced to wear leather pants. Also, I love his accusations of Dark's previous occupations.

Livi
killah-sama
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
/silence/ ...

/more silence/ ...

Screw silence! Oh my GAWD, that was PERFECT! xD Hilarious and sexy and WOW! Update soon. ^_n
Solo Maxwell-Yamato
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
*snickers*
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