 Failing Mentality 2009-06-10 . chapter 2Throughout the the previous chapter and this chapter are inconsistencies about Daisuke's sight. Daisuke is blind, and therefore is unable to see Satoshi's bruises. There are other instances, of which made me doubt Daisuke's blindness. |
 killah-sama 2008-08-07 . chapter 2Agh. Sato! Damn you for being all bruised up and tired.
You could have /totally/ had your way with Daisuke at that moment! I mean...look at the way he was dressed! Mm. :D |
 Liviania 2007-12-03 . chapter 2I'm glad you've continued! . . . though I'm surprised Satoshi wasn't more surprised by Daisuke's clothing.
Livi |
 Nikotehfox 2007-12-01 . chapter 2heh. Dark gets what Dark wants, eh? |
 Solo Maxwell-Yamato 2007-11-27 . chapter 2: D Entertaining chapter. |
 moongirlSelene99 2007-01-24 . chapter 1nice... good luck on plotting the sequel! |
 Liviania 2006-12-18 . chapter 1Heh, Dark is very cruel. Though really, Daisuke could have much worse happen to him than being forced to wear leather pants. Also, I love his accusations of Dark's previous occupations.
Livi |
 killah-sama 2006-12-03 . chapter 1/silence/ ...
/more silence/ ...
Screw silence! Oh my GAWD, that was PERFECT! xD Hilarious and sexy and WOW! Update soon. ^_n |
 Solo Maxwell-Yamato 2006-12-03 . chapter 1*snickers* |