i loved this story, im not a bones fan but i had a craving to read a buffy and booth story and am happy i came across this one, i hope you decide to do more crossovers between the two :)

I Love this story!! Can you possible make a sequel or oneshots that could take place in between chapters...like when Buffy meet the Squints and visited Booth's office...when Buffy and Booth spare...when she meets Parker and Rebecca...then do a shot of the future of the wedding and/or their life in 10 years! I think that would be so awesome with your writing skills!

This was such a cute cross-over why don't you have it under Buffy X-overs?

5 STARS!

PS: Why didn't you have any of the squints or Bones mentioned for the rest of the fic?

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OMG!! i absolutly loved this story! ive read it like 3 times and its still awesome! okay now that ive got that out of my system. lol. thanks for a wonderful read, and i love pretty much all of your Buffy/Angel stories as well, having read them all. yuor a magnificent writer. Cheers.

As always, an enjoyable story from you. The only problem I had with it was the dialogue got overly long at some points and I wasn't sure who was speaking. Still, it was a fun read.

Wow, this is definitely the best Bones/BtVS story I've ever seen. Very sweet.

I searched for a good Buffy/Bones crossover for a while, and somehow I never came across this one. So I decided to give it a try and write my own. Boy, is it harder than I thought. Your story is so well written. Your give great descriptional detail, something I haven't quite gotten down yet. I'm adding you to my faves and alerts, maybe, hopefully, you will write more Buffy/Bones.

you're a decent writer, it's true, and i'm so glad to have finally found a buffy/bones fic, but i do have a few suggestions that might help improve your writing style.


1. Dialog, especially between more than two people, works best when the reader doesn't have to struggle to figure out who is speaking. Like in the third chapter with the conversation between Booth Scully and Mulder, all three spoke, but I had a hard time figuring out who was saying what. That's easily remedied with a "Booth said... Mulder implied... Scully scoffed..." etc.

2. There were some very abrupt transitions going on, especially in the first chapters that were very confusing. It's best to either leave an extra space between the paragraphs that jump scene or some sort of page break, if you don't want to explain the scene jump in the writing. (Either way is prefectly acceptable, of course.)

For instance, Booth was thinking about something as he drove while talking to Bones, but then suddenly he was on the street in Ohio, then suddenly in the crawl space of the house. While I could normally accept that as abrupt change and something went wrong with the page breaks, it seemed like Bones and Booth had a continuous conversation throughout it all, covering the space of over an hour with dialog that could only possibly last ten minutes at most.


This is by no means an attack on your writing and I wouldn't bother saying anything at all if I thought you were hopeless. Your dialog is believable (even if I don't know who's saying it:) and you don't make many (if any, I hadn't noticed) of the most common grammatical and spelling errors an author could make. I hope you continue writing while bearing these critiques in mind. Good job and good luck!

This was very well written, I really hope you write more with Booth/Buffy.

Great first chapter, I can't wait to read the rest! :)

This was a great story. Now I wish I could find some more Buufy/Booth