I enjoyed it...simple and well-written.

Beautiful. Very bittersweet, but with a lovely hopeful, healing note at the end.

Wonderful. I love it.
Particulary the end was beautiful. It was sad, but relaxing an smooth at the same time. Well done.

~ML~

This is easily the best Riza/Ed I have ever read. I absolutely loved it. Please, please write more for this pairing.

I love the characterizations, I love the concept, the writing is smooth and really, very impressive. I just have one critique. The transition from her memories to her sitting and talking to the grave can be a little confusing.

Very nice! I liked how she left him baked goods. *grin* It was well written and I think very much in character. Very sweet/sad.

May I just say that that was beautiful. Like, wow. I LOVE Riza/Ed but there is so very little good Riza/Ed out there. I loved this.

Kind of sadly sweet...

*dances around like a maniac* Good Riza/Ed! Good Riza/Ed! Good Riza/Ed! Yes!

I loved it! It was awesome!

Wow. I really, really liked this. Riza and Ed are my favorite characters, and while I don't normally like Riza/Ed, I think you really pulled it off by making it friendship with hints of attraction that never goes anywhere. It was, in one word, amazing.

i want to cry the ending was so sweet...

painful, but gorgeous. believeable Riza/Ed. awesome ♥

Well written!

I suppose that seems like a small critique, but I'm usually on the alert for typos and gramatical inconsistencies, and there were *none* here.

Thank you for a worry free reading experience. You made me miss him too.

-Rantza

Excellent fic, very nicely written... very sad, though. I liked the different view of Ed and Riza's relationship. Good work.

I shall start this off by saying that I generally do not like RizaEd. The summery, though, intrigued me, and my mind is open enough that I read it. I'm very glad that I did. I found that the story is surprisingly well written, in-character, and touching. In particular, I liked how Riza brought him pastries instead of flowers. Because that's true- I imagine that he *would* like that more.
~Hiddenstars