wow. that story was great. very nicely done.

Found the story and love the downsized Daniel. Can't wait to read all the chapters

Wow - loved this story. Enjoyed the twist of Daniel Jackson being a kid. Thank you.

This was really really cute. I normally don't like ships all that much, or stories leading to ships, but you put it in and made it work very well (it probably helped the Jack and Sara already had a past to work off of--I hate it when it is completely unbelievable).

Jeez...I think I'm gonna cry. Sha're?? That's...sad...perfect...*sniffs*
Okay, I'd like to say just one thing after seconding everything I said about HAT. I really admire your ability to write things like this, where you change one big thing from the series, but connect it back to the series in the end...with a couple of changes. (To support that: I liked the reference to Cam...again. ;p )
Loved it, Cleo! You're amazing!
-Briar
Oh, and about the publishing? I know EXACTLY what you mean. I've finally decided I've been working on my novel for five years, it's about time I take a break on writing fanfiction and FINISH my novel...we'll see how well that works out. ;p

Thank heavens! The Nox!

Whoa, whoa, whoa, the guy who practically killed him?! *sprints to read more*

I really don't like it when people scream. I'm just going to say that much.

Whoa...that was a loaded chapter. Jeez. Blunt force trauma. Nice Dannywhumping but seeing as he's a kid now...bugs me more than it usually would.

You ARE freaking evil! I was all going to gush over the whole chemistry over characters and now I'm freaking out about thinking what Jack's reaction to this is going to be!

*giggles* I always LOVE how Jack is smarter than he likes people to think. Kinda like Calvin in Calvin and Hobbes.

"Then the voices and sounds of the SGC were miles away, because Daniel's face was pressed against Jack's collar, and Jack still smelled safe."
*joins the deafening chorus of 'aw's* AW! Beautiful sentence right there!

Aw...that was amazingly adorable...it's weird to see Jack acting so much like a father, especcially when the kid's Daniel...but I'm liking it so far!

Little Daniel is so cute!

aw...little danny is so cute!!