 Ahjus 2009-11-16 . chapter 1 THAT ROCKED! |
 selena 2007-04-01 . chapter 1 Aww! That was really sweet! |
 ZeBubba 2007-03-14 . chapter 1a bit anti-climatic But awesome none ze less. |
 bahjcb 2007-01-11 . chapter 1 You have reason to be proud of that fic, it was great. And so cute. I can't wait to read more stories you. I hope they are all Malink, however. I don't really believe there should be anyother kind. |
 Clover64 2006-12-31 . chapter 1I love the Malink fluff! Great job! |
 The Evil Overlord Crazy L 2006-12-06 . chapter 1Lordy... that was AWSOME! You were so god! Cool. |
 TheOtherWriter 2006-12-05 . chapter 1 Fabulous job! I love love loved it. You have such an amazing character grip on Link. For a guy that doesn't talk much he sure says the most adorable things.
The end was a little forced but I loved the story anyways. I'm always looking for new Fanfics to illustrate and this one wants to make me draw. xD
I can't wait to see more from you. Kudos for a first great peice. :steals Link's hat and runs far far away:
-T.O.W |
 Trey178 2006-12-05 . chapter 1I have to say that I'm imprssed. It makes me think that I should've started my stories with a oneshot, just to get my name out there. Excellent first effort and I hope to see more from you. |
 Nintendo x Freak 2006-12-04 . chapter 1Wow! Very good. Bravâ—‹!
I would have very liked it if you would have written a little more about the family, wedding, ect. But, over all, It's great! Keep up the good work! |
 BabyGurl278 2006-12-04 . chapter 1This was a very good one-shot, especially since it was your first one.
I, myself, am a big fan of Malon and Link pairings so I knew I had to check it out once I read the summary.
The moment I started reading it I was hooked. You surely captured the moment at the end and I really like how it was Malon's birthday. You have a good writing style and for some reason I really love the title. Haha. I'm a sucker for awesome titles though.
Very good. I liked it alot and the ending was so sweet. We have to create more Malon and Link stories! Get more people falling for the pairing.
Keep up the good work!
*Baby-G* |
 BlazeStarre 2006-12-03 . chapter 1Malink fluff! Yay! ^_^ This was just awesome! Since this is your first story on is it your first fan fic ever or what? The description was great. You should do a sequel of some sort- like their life on the ranch with two kids and all that jazz... Just an idea! Keep on writing Zelda fics, I want to see more from you. ;) |
 Cenedarprime 2006-12-03 . chapter 1Excellently done, Layren. For a first voyage into the dangerous world that is I think you'll be able to hold your own. I'll be sure to get a blurb for you in my profile!
P.S. I'm touched that you dedicated this story to me, by the way.
Cenedarprime |
 dream.sequins 2006-12-03 . chapter 1Aw! I loved this. Malon taking cae of Link's wounds...no matter how many times I see it, the author always finds a way to make it original (like how you made it Malon's birthday and whatnot), so the storyline never gets old! |