I really am impressed by this story. I am sorry you stopped writing. Your really good.

i li8ke it but have you abandoned this story? i hope not because it is really good.

Are you ever going to continue this story? PLease!

Update this soon please!

aw
por favor, mi amiga *-*

I'm dying to see what will happen next!
when will yout update?
I'm loving!

and a little thing: wouldn't it be interesting for Neji to be a little puppteer too? Since he learnd Deidei's and Kisame's jutsus, I was thinking of it xP
well, it's up to you. Just a suggest.

entonces
te vejo después ;*

nee, you're kidding with me. it's just...! too perfect!!

poor of Neji *n* *snif*

what did he say? what did he say? what did he say?
what did neji say? please! tell me that it's slipped out at the next chap! *n*

O.o
how... pretty *-*
now I HAVE TO know what happens next

ps.: I'll send you the chapters later

I'll do as I do with that friend I told you about. I'll copy the chapter, mark the things I think can be changed, write how I see to be fitter and will send you by e-mail ^^

I might send the to you tomorrow, 'cause I'm tired now. and I also might leave some mistakes.

and now, the review for the chapter! ^^
it's just beauty! say, we like to torture Neji, nee ^u^

tomorrow we chat more
see ya

oh, thanks for the reply ^^
and about that thing, well, I try ^^" since I had spanish and english at school, I learned something usefull :p

and yeah, I'll let you know everything I see that doesn't fit.
an... to begin... bleh! >.< it's dificult since it'll be a little off of context. but I think I had an idea of how to do that. I'll get the part of the fic, copy it to here and corret as I see, ok? and it'll be in order. also if you wanna me to do this with the chapters before, just ask. It'll not be annoing. I do that with a giant fic of a friend that's at the 62nd chapter, and it's nice to read again :P

oh, well, I'll wait for your reply before writing down here what you could not like. until that, I'll be reading.
*I'm stil reading this chapter
ps.: if it's better for you to speak in spanish, feel free, I'll understand (I'm brazilian, so it's not that dificult for me to understand your language), but I'll keep on english. if that's ok, so, do how you prefer

er.. I'm not the one that can be the very critical but I found some errors throughout the chapter... they're very few, but still a little crap >.<
just to inform you, ok?

although the fic os pretty great!!*-* Itachi and Sasuke will fight! *-* I love it!!

hm... some little things that I think you had to pay more attention:

tree = arból
three = 3
guard robe -> wardrobe (I'm not totally sure, but it's some thing like this)
trough -> through
Ones -> once (I think it was what you meant, right? una vez or otra vez quando és "once again")

sorry, I'm being as a beta... it's the habit of doing this in portuguese xP
although it's not beta-ed, it pretty nice. the story always is, but there are some little things you can see are wrong just by read the chapter after writting it. belive me, it's useful ^^

so, now I'm going to the next =*

I wanna see what Itachi had done with Neji *singing*

I didn't know you are from Mexico (I took a look at your profile ^^), and your english is retty good.
i'd speak with you in spanish, but I'm better in english so... that's the thing. Yeah that I know a bit o spanish but... there comes the laziness xP

ah! muy linda tu fic!! yo amo torturar Neji también *-*
si te interessa leer mis hitorias, sintate a vontad (did I write something wrong? is so, please tell me. I'll be pleased ^^)