Aww, that was so sweet! Beautifully written.

Damn. That must be hard to do it in the 2nd POV. Really deep. I would've prefered if you never mentioned the names though; it'd add to the mystery of it all. *light chuckle*

WH00T ONE OF MY FAVORITE PAIRINGS! XDXDXD
NEJIxTENTEN FOREVAH
Lol anyways...
I really like it! ^_^

Aw. .. .Neji's pleading. . . .

Your story is really good, and I like the way you write it. Angst...so sad but so good!

wow... It seems heartbreaking at first, but then it gets really sweet. I guess it's both.

Really beautifully done. :) I would really be happy if you continued! Wwhat happened that Neji had to apologize for? Why did he leave? What made him come back?

It was really good!! I can't find a word to describe it! I was sweet, mysterious, and ... something else I can't put my finger on, but I like. Good Job! Keep writing and good job! You are really good at writing Nejiten fics, so keep it up! Congrats on writing such an awesome fic!! not much more I can say since it already rocks!

Keep on writing,

^_^

Princess Aiyana

*favs fic*