A magnifecent story so good awsome wow write more i beg of please ur a dang good writer dont mean 2 b a sissy even tho ima gal u had me bawlin my eyes out when she killed percy keep up tha good work wish ya luck

holy ** it twas a dream? O_o

nice story!

Brilliant. This was written extremely well. To bad it's a one shot.

This was EXTREMELY well done, had me crying. T_T But the ending didn't really seem to fit, in my eyes anyways. >>;; 'Course, what would I know. Good job!

~Zen-chan~

very well written, nicely done. i liked the twist at the end. nice quote at the beginning, too.

Ai ai ai ai!
Awesome! Brilliant! ...Cataclysmic?
Tis I, your faithful reviewer and very annoying compadre! Ai ai ai! I heart this story! It's dark, its twisted, loaded with tension and betrayal.. and it's absolutely forking superb!
Ai ai ai! I heart Percy