Good story. I guessed what was going on when "Carson" started figuring out how the water system worked and working on the plans for it in his head.

Brilliant! Just brilliant... I know a Sholio fic is always going to be a good one and this one certainly was!

And whoa! What a twist - you sure got me there, didn't see it coming at all :)

You totally had me thinking Rodney was the injured one almost until the reveal, and then the intuitive side of my brain smacked the literal side and was all "Duh! They're switched!"

That's really what it was like, too.

Mwahaha...John rear-ended a jumper into the ground. Good thing there's no insurance agency in Pegasus to explain *that* to. lol

I loved the banter at the end. M...shiny, shiny banter.

Cheers!

Outstanding story. The identity switch was brilliant and wonderfully executed. I also love the description of the jumper orientation during the rescue, and of course, Sheppard fainting in the middle The little caring moments between Rodney and Carson are wonderful too.

I was taken completely off-guard by the plot twist, and yet rereading it I notice lots of foreshadowing on it. The way it was told was simply masterful. The rest of the plot was extremely well-done too, in no way overshadowed by the original story concept.

I'm really glad you wrote about Rodney and Carson instead of Sheppard and Rodney. Rodney believed Carson to be his best friend, but there's so very little written about their friendship. Thank you for this!

That is great stuff! Very believeable even when I thought Beckett was actually McKay! Well done!

A good story, with an interesting premise. You had me fooled!

Thanks.

Smashingly good!! I was totally sucked in by the identity thing--didn't figure it out ahead of time at all, though in retrospect the signs were there: absolutely perfect, that's just exactly the way I like my plot twists! And the bickering in the infirmary was priceless, and exactly in character! ^^

I LOVE THIS...This is perfect- I could imagine the people of Atlantis actually speak and act as you described-you did a damn good job here...Indeed this could be taken as guideline for a real episode... you have a very good empathy for this for sure!
K

Oh my GAWD~ I LOVED IT!

This...
"Hey! I got shot while I was valiantly covering your body with my own after you fainted, Colonel."

"You were doing what with his unconscious body, Rodney?" Teyla sounded drowsy, and perfectly innocent.

"Argh!"
... made me lol for way too long and way too hard.

XD Thank you. It was awesome. And I was so shocked when we realize that it's Rodney who's awake and not Carson! :) Plot twist~

That was amazing! Very well written and i was really suprised when i found out that theyd mistaken Rodney for Carson! Very awesome story! Thanks for lettin' me read it!

Lots o' love!
~Tippy

I truly enjoyed this. Very well written. I couldn't stop until the end.

This was amazing.
As I was reading it, I realized that McKay has the sarcastic wit of my friend Spike...who coincidentally looks similar to John...
Funny how that works...
Great job!

Great twist with the Rodney/Beckett mix-up! (Didn’t see that coming.) Such a great building of tension once the jumper with Sheppard and Weir arrived, I was on the edge of my seat, literally!

A wonderful story with a great twist. Loved the little bits of humor you had, especially with the arguments about the accents and the banter at the end. Keep up the good work. :D