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| PinkSander 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseThat is great stuff! Very believeable even when I thought Beckett was actually McKay! Well done! |
| imloopy 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseA good story, with an interesting premise. You had me fooled! Thanks. |
| Trishkafibble 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseSmashingly good!! I was totally sucked in by the identity thing--didn't figure it out ahead of time at all, though in retrospect the signs were there: absolutely perfect, that's just exactly the way I like my plot twists! And the bickering in the infirmary was priceless, and exactly in character! ^^ |
| Green-eyed Hobbit 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS...This is perfect- I could imagine the people of Atlantis actually speak and act as you described-you did a damn good job here...Indeed this could be taken as guideline for a real episode... you have a very good empathy for this for sure! K |
| Sepik 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseOh my GAWD~ I LOVED IT! This... "Hey! I got shot while I was valiantly covering your body with my own after you fainted, Colonel." "You were doing what with his unconscious body, Rodney?" Teyla sounded drowsy, and perfectly innocent. "Argh!" ... made me lol for way too long and way too hard. XD Thank you. It was awesome. And I was so shocked when we realize that it's Rodney who's awake and not Carson! :) Plot twist~ |
| Hanmyo 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing! Very well written and i was really suprised when i found out that theyd mistaken Rodney for Carson! Very awesome story! Thanks for lettin' me read it! Lots o' love! ~Tippy |
| LittleKnobi 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI truly enjoyed this. Very well written. I couldn't stop until the end. |
| Saynt Jimmy 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing. As I was reading it, I realized that McKay has the sarcastic wit of my friend Spike...who coincidentally looks similar to John... Funny how that works... Great job! |
| emergencyfan 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat twist with the Rodney/Beckett mix-up! (Didn’t see that coming.) Such a great building of tension once the jumper with Sheppard and Weir arrived, I was on the edge of my seat, literally! |
| blueoctober 2007-01-08 ch 1, | abuseA wonderful story with a great twist. Loved the little bits of humor you had, especially with the arguments about the accents and the banter at the end. Keep up the good work. :D |
| stargate addict 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseThis story rocks! :) (Okay, maybe I should elaborate...) I liked the friendship betwen Carson & Rodney. My head is still spinning from when you made Rodney think he was Carson. ;) It added a really neat twist. I could just picture Ronon getting mad at John & Rodney for arguing when he was trying to sleep. lol! This fic has me wanting more! I guess I'll just read your other stories. :) |
| Shinyologist 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseHi there, Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful story. You have fabulous characterization, great dialogue and I loved the twist! Really enjoyed this - can’t wait to read more of your work. :o) Best wishes, HeliaR |
| mouse8 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseAnother awesome story (I hope you're not getting bored with my unimaginative reviews). A nice little mystery strung into a creative plot. Wonderful! |
| gabumon 2006-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story. that really through me for a loop when it was rodney not carson they were thinking was the doctor, i couldnt tell the difference until rodney got more of his memories back. And like i said before, EXCELLENT story! |
| Jess 2006-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseA good story! I especially liked the twist was Carson realized he wasn't. That caught me be surprise and made the whole story that much more intriguing. Thanks for sharing! |