I don't understand why other reviewers can't read sentences properly. This is well-done, and easily understood for those who wish to take perhaps thirty more seconds reading the fic. I really enjoy Al's insanity, and the weaving of the past and present at the end. It makes the ending poignant and yet leaves little room for sympathy.
Good job on this.

I liked your fanfiction a lot, it just let me slightly confused. Like a previous reviewer, I don't quite understand who died. You write that Mustang's death was better than Edward's had been, but I don't understand when Mustang died. The whole section starting with "he felt a pang of remorse" and ending with "better than Edward's had been" confused me. Before and after that section; I understood the story. Do you think you could explain it to me. I would greatly appreciate it. I would really like to understnad all of your wonderful fanfiction. Sorry for leaving such a long review.

And so everybody dies, and a new terror is bourne to the world. x_X Wonderful. This was an incredible story, like always. Honestly, I love fics with Crazy!Al trying to bring back Ed. I actually felt sorry for Al at the end. -shiver- And the time shifting was done perfectly. -tries to imagine Edward saying "Hate living!" and fails-

Wow. That was goosebump-inducing. I loved the interchange of past and present time you did at the end. That was masterfully done.

So~, if I'm correct, Edward sacrificed his soul for some reason, and Alphonse thought he died. So when Al brought back Ed, Ed was a Homunculus?
I'm only guessing.
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Part homunculus?
Blah, I don't know, but I like your one-shot. Maybe a prequel/sequel in the works?

um...care to explain a bit more? i seem to be confused. =' . '=

I'm confused about the second half, mainly who or what died in the process of reviving Ed.

It's alright, but the first and last parts don't seem complete, they seem rushed, and lack details.

That and, why does the last segment switch between italics and non-italics repeatedly?