I'm a little puzzled: is this story set after season five, during it or in stead of it? If it's set during the time the Team were working for Stockwell you might have a tough time finding Murdock in LA as he went with the Team to Langley (Virginia).

Can't quite believe that a colonel would patiently wait for an hour before a receptionist would come back with an answer.

Other than that, I'm curious where this is going.