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| Bouljujube 2006-12-31 ch 4, | abuseour story is so good so far. You've got the sense of SG-1 itself. Good work! |
| star trek chick 2006-12-06 ch 18, | abuseKudos to the author I enjoyed the story a lot. Some comments though: I found it difficult to understand the 'car transport' that you used to transport the team between gates. I don't think I really grasped the idea of just how they were being moved, nor in Chapter 17 how they found themselves in the oubliette. I didn't think it was explained to the reader very well. Having said all that, it was a very enjoyable fic and you wrote the characters well. They sounded like SG-1, and if we have that it makes the fic for me. Thanks!! |
| purplepenguin1013 2006-12-05 ch 18, | abuseThanks so much for posting this. Sometimes it feels like no one is producing any good , long, genfic anymore. This felt wonderfully in canon and was a pleasure to read. |
| star trek chick 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is one impressive story. Enjoying your writing style a lot, it seems very spare (in a good way). Sometimes writers think a lot of excessive verbiage is better. It's not! So delighted to have stumbled upon this one, I've read 8 chapters in one sitting but it's late and I'll have to save it for tomorrow. |
| pain in the mikta 2006-12-04 ch 16, | abuseHow Jack! Very in character! This stuff is pretty good! 8-) |
| pain in the mikta 2006-12-04 ch 6, | abuseAh! Smart Jack! I luv it! Too bad most of it is underlined, though, makes it hard to read... :-/ |