Amazing story hope you write more

Hi!

I'm very interested. Please update soon!

XxStrawberryKittyxx

this is pretty good. keep up the good work !

I thought I'd give you the benefit of a doubt... after all, it was just the first chapter... *cripples over and twitches* too... much... marysue... need good OCs... good... fanfics so close, yet so far... must reach them before- XP *dead*

*twitch twitch* MARY... SUE... EVIL... RUN AWAY! *flees for life*

no, really, I'm reading about this Coral chick and you got some major Mary-Sue issues. Really, no one is that perfect and cool about everything. Now, slap yourself in the face and try observing real life for a while.

This chapter was slightly confusing the way it was all bunched together, but it was pretty good. Another damn cliffhanger!! Gah,I hate those things...but I can't really complain I guess, update soon!!

Very Nice beginning!! Update soon!! Can't wait to read more!!