A great story. Very good.

That was so wonderful! Very in character as well. And that is not easy!

Beatuiful!

You have amazing description. I loved how you described her.

Awesome work!

Wow. This is fantastic writing. Brilliant work. I'm faving this.

I love the way you've pulled everything together. You hardly see the things from Tia's perspective on this event. Lovely job. Perhaps a bit wordy when describing her as the Queen of Fate - you could leave a few sentences out and make is a great deal more ambiguous - but this was fantastic.

The closing sentence was pure gold. Kudos!

“Even the smallest person can change the course of the future”, huh?
Indeed. What can I say? – Another great one shot! Loved it, really.
And although I’ve seen DMC last September… it is indeed STILL unbearable to me to put his… you know, into the words.
The thing that shocked me most of all perhaps was the one that he, well, actually WENT for it, I mean – almost smiling. “‘Ello beastie!” – I’ve cried my guts out the first time I saw that. And I cry every time I see that, still. Maybe ‘cause it reminds me on the death (LORD, it hurts!) of Cuthbert Allgood (from “The Dark Tower” by S. King) – he is the first for me, even before Cpt. Sparrow. Bert has also gone to his death laughing, as hard as ever… I better go now, or computer will drown in my tears.
Lovely, lovely done, love!

I thought this was brilliantly written, very deep yet easy to read. I love the way you write Tia, there certainly is more to her than we've seen so far, and this ties into the story really well. I can imagine her having the visions and having to carry the burden of knowing the future - interesting point well made. Good job. The claws never lie!

Beautiful! And perfectly captured. This is how all fictions regarding this...er...um...he...matter (yes, too soon indeed to put into words) should follow your directions.

An interesting twist to the story...
Brilliantly written. What more can I say?

wow- I really liked this... she seems like she would be this tricky and roundabout in the movie so good job!

I loved Tia Dalma, and I hope they show more of her in the next film. You portrayed her beautifully. I loved it.

Excellent job. You portrayed Tia Dalma very true-to-character. I liked the message, too: the world does need Jack Sparrow, if only to make people laugh a little.