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| Marty 2008-03-24 ch 14, anon. | abuseIt's an amazing story. I've had my heart totally bursting out! Now I'm crying sigh sigh after such a happy ending! |
| Martina 2008-02-28 ch 9, anon. | abuseHi! I read your first nine chapters, and they are all very nice! I've had some small problems with interpretation 'cause i'm italian, but it's a very good work. I was just thinking that Sora is a pretty black character, isn't she? You might make her a bit more cheerful, or it may sound unlikely that Jim falls for her. Good job anyway! |
| Kizzy Bloom 2007-11-27 ch 14,  | abuseOMFG YAY ^>^ i |
| MagicAnimeGirl 2007-11-24 ch 14, anon. | abuseHey that was a pretty awesome story! ^_^ I ♥ Teasure Planet and you really made it sound like it was an alternate plot for the moive, sth rare! Oh, and thankfully Sora was not a Mary Sue! ^_~ Hope ya write a sequel! Ja ne! |
| SocialMoth 2007-11-17 ch 14, | abuseLovely, lovely, LOVELY story. :) I enjoyed reading it through to the end. I'm not sure whether I personally would write a sequel, but I would certainly read it if you decided to go through with it. You're welcome, and thank YOU for sharing this with us. :) |
| Running to Stand Still 2007-11-14 ch 14, | abuse:O I frigging love you to death. Absolutely love you. To death, beyond death. WOW! This is so absolutely amazing! I was reading and I was like "OMG THEY'LL NEVER SEE EACH OTHER AGAIN!" And I was crying. And I still am. Because OMG this is so... wow! Amazing! And words cannot describe it! I love you. I said that already... well, I love you. WOW, I can't believe it... wow. Lol, shocked... I love you. Uhm, yes... wow. What an amazing story! The romance, WOW. Amazement. ->Running. |
| Flopsy95 2007-11-12 ch 14, | abuseYay! This was a lovely ending. I loved this story!! God Bless! |
| Hatsue Cybanne 2007-08-31 ch 13, | abuseGreat story^^ Update soon~ |
| Christian4Life 2007-08-20 ch 13, | abusewow! incredible!! (how many reviews have you recieved saying something like that? a million?) hope the next chapter is just as long...but no as long to wait for. ;) you really do have a talent for writting! |
| Rebel of my Destiny 2007-08-20 ch 13, | abuseWow, this chapter was awesome! I can't wait to see the last chapter! |
| Flopsy95 2007-08-20 ch 13, | abuseKayla: O.O Kairi: Um...sis? Kayla:... Kairi: (sweatsdrop) This chapter was really good and we can't wait for you to update! God Bless! |
| SocialMoth 2007-08-20 ch 13, | abuseYay for an update! And I still love this story; still love Sora... I love your use of dialogue in this chapter (well, in every chapter really, but this is the only chapter I've read for a while). It's very real, very full of emotion. :) Last chapter next?? Well... I'm hoping things turn out all right for both of them. |
| Kizzy Bloom 2007-08-20 ch 13, | abuseomg, that was amazing! i cant wait till you update! |
| Songorita 2007-08-05 ch 12, | abusePlease update soon. |
| Rebel of my Destiny 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseYES! This is Awesome! Keep going!! I love your character! |