It's really good so far. You've deffinitely have an interesting plot.

I think I've said this quite a few times in my reviews for your other stories, but...interesting. This is interesting.
I love your fics. Why? They have TezuFuji and are just too amazing to pass up. :3
REVIEWING!
Now update! =D
Always yours,
schizo-chan

Forty first reviewer
:) Update?

Well, with this one review of mine, you will have a total of 40 reviews for this story, and that makes it 20 for each chapter. Is it enough for you to update? Please?

Nya... Tezuka wasn't there. T-T

But I think it's adorable. The flashback-y part in chapter one really set the stage and hooked me, which means... if I offer more cookies, may I have an update? -hopefully brings out tray of cookies-

Update please. The end of the first chapter interests me.

I love it! *sque* "I wonder if he keeps wasabi sushi." Most awesome line ever.

*I wonder if he keeps wasabi sushi...*

Hilarious. That line will live on forever, lol. Please, more chapters soon.

Liking it;)

Very Nice. More soon please. I wanna know what's going on.

ok. i'm reviewing. i think i already read all your POT fics...
hehe. nice.
anyway, a pretty short chappy, and not much action, so we're still waiting.
update soon! good luck!

Haha that was funny. Fuji has just been hit by a car and all he can think about is wasabi sushi. x3

Interesting. This story is definately unique, and I want to see more. ^^ Update soon.

ok, review, review. I read your reviews and I think it's time to give you something more than fangirl squeeing, because I believe you are worth the effort.

This story is interesting. However, has its issues as well. I do believe some people live like Tezuka does. I have a friend of mine, who lives on a similar basis. However, you realize that if he did on a long term basis, his health would suffer greatly right? Not to mention that he would sleep through the whole weekend, Fuji or no Fuji in his appartment.

Apropo Fuji...no CD player in the world can save you from a car. I mean...more than half a ton in movemenet? A cd player in your pocket? It is probable that Tezuka's car didn't hit him so hard, but the explanation for him not being hurt seriously is just underestimating our intelligence. You should have rather stuck with mere luck.

And...I do know that lack of sleep causes jumbled thinking, but Tezuka is a smart boy. He probably has heard about internal injuries. If you hit somebody in a car, would you really take them home? Risk that they may die because you overlooked something?

It's a pity that you lower the standard of your story with such trivial matters. I do believe your writing is worthy of noting. And would be even better if your planning was more developed. To follow your feelings in writing and let your imagination fly is ok, if it is not on the expense of logic. If there is some history between Tezuka and Fuji, you should have made a clearer hint while Tezuka was awake, because otherwise it makes him just...really tired or...something he is not.

And one more thing, which bothers me a lot. You are a promissing writer, I think. Why do you keep asking for reviews in such a childish manner? No reviews, no chapters. You should make us write reviews with your great writing. You yourself must believe in your story, that it's worthy of something. Do you have any doubts in this area?

Do not take this as bashing. It is not intended so. I do admit it's a little hard constructive criticism. I definitely hope it's not destructive. But I aim to help, because I believe you are worth it. And I would love to see more talent blossoming in this fandom.

I am sending this review as anonymous, if you want to, you can delete it. If you want to discuss, though, let me know
akin@atlas.sk

Tezuka's life is so sad here. He really must works hard for living. I wonder how would their relationship bloom from now. Would it be love in the first sight? Please post the next chapter quickly!