poor kaoru.
yea, i'd be pretty embarassed too if aoshi found me smashing my skull in...

please continue this :D
yay.

That's well written. Love the 'first time he saw her, she tried to kill herself' bit. So Kenshin's dead?

In case there are those of you wondering about the same questions as Belle the answers are yes this is an on-going fic and for the others they will eventually be revealed as the story goes on.

Thanks again for the praises and reviews everyone!

-GD

Is this ongoing or a one shot? What happens now that Aoshi saved her life? What was he doing there? Megumi is still there? She didn't go off to find her family?

i love it

Beautiful! You're writing just keeps getting better and better! I don't have enough words to express myself when you write your stories ^__^ Awesome prologue I can't wait to read more. Please please update soon!

You right Rk fics too? Yippee!! And it features my most fave couple: AoshiXKaoru!!

Great job! Love this fic too!

lovem,
ardenilia

Loved this!

The word use and descriptions were wonderful, you really took care in picking out which words to use and which would have the best effect.

“I always did follow your lead didn’t I Kenshin?”

That sentence was great, it captured entirely what Kaoru was doing (or meant to do) but with a hint of irony. Great.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Sanne.

I love it!! Please up-date again soon! I am definitely adding this story to my favorites list. Keep up the awesome job! Yeah, for Aoshi and Kaoru!

wow, clever start. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Nice way to start the story, and getting Kenshin out of the way without hurting him (well if you consider him dead not hurting him, lol).

Not to mention just how much I miss reading AK fics, so I'm very grateful that you're writing this. Please update soon, I can't wait to read what happens next :D

Great Start!
I like how this is different,hope to read more!