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Reviews For: Ranger's Charmer

Angel-of-vampires
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was so sweet!
I liked that Scarface accepted Charmer as Rangers mate.
That was sweet!
Joe
2007-08-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery good...short, but good.
Azelia Juin
2007-06-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is nice. It's interesting and different :D Great!
Haileyamandar
2007-03-10
ch 1,
abuseCute story ^.^ I loved how original your idea was.
You were very detailed, and I liked that. Just try to work on grammar and punctuation.
MoonlitPuddle
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseShaky grammer, and punctuation, did you proof read this before you posted it? The idea was new, but I think I prefer Scarface to be bad thru and thru, not as nice as you make him out to be. Also, "Parker" and "Walker" as names arn't that great...for me they make me think of Thunderbirds and Dad's Army, but maybe that's just me!
Still, I like it that Ranger and Charmer had cubs, cause they were such a Romeo and Juliet pair!
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