Loved that last one.

Wonderful ending!

Keep writing!

Please?

Aw.

The picture I have of Zuko will be forever changed.

And this line-“So snicker what’s a cute little thing like you cackle doing with a grumpy sourpuss like him?”

giggle, snort, guffaw

Yep, that's my reaction.

I loved the Iroh in this. Excellent!

Whoa, that was rough.

Wow, when I saw how short this was, I didn't expect that much from it. That was beautiful. What a wonderful description! Wow!

I have to disagree with you on this one. While the pony tail was nice and Zuko's bald head well-shaped, His hair in "Lake Laogai" was by far the best hair style we've seen.
My opinion, worth about as much as that lake front property you keep adverising.

I love your disclaimer! Many writers overlook the virtues of the disclaimer. You have shown yourself to be above the common and insignificant one-liners. Use the disclaimers, they are your greatest weapons(okay, maybe not greatest)(or weapons).

That was cute.

I so want this in canon! Seriously.

Wee!! Awsocute!

*tears spring to her eyes* No more? *somewhere, God kills a kitten* NO MORE?!?!?!? *falls over from shock*

...I'm with Gran-Gran on this one...

These were so cute and sweet!