i think it was really good,i don't think that there were any spelling errors

this is a really sweet story. i like it.

It...was short...-_-'

awesome story! it rocked! i love the part about riku thinking he found his long lost twin! lol! ^_^

-RubberDuckiesWhoLikePieAndCake

The Inner Voice was right! The picture was perfect after she gave so luvin' to Roxas! ALL HAIL THE INNER VOICE!

OMG! They're both crazy... I feel kinda bad for Namine though... in her pajamas...

Namine's inner voice does have the personality that she doesn't... that's just a little odd, but very funny.

WHAT'S WRONG WITH APPLE PIE, ROXAS? YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH IT?

ofcorse you should keep doing fics... it wasn't the best i read but it was short and sweet... u can always make the next one better right... well i hope you do continue writing fics cause that was a really good one

GREAT JOB!

Are you kidding me? You bet your butt you better write a sequel. I liked this story, even though it was kind of short, I loved every moment of it. I hope you continue to write more Namine/Roxas fics in the future.
I also hope you write that sequel too =3 Good work. Keep it up.
~Mistress of Serenity

I liked this chapter. It was beautiful and long =3 Keep up the good work.
~Mistress of Serenity

Very interesting story...I definately want to see what happens next! :D
-Minelle

Good first two chapters, they were too short though.

I rhink this fic is awsome. I may not like apple pie, but I love this story. It is really good, but the chapters are a little short