Kya~ >.<
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WARNING WARNING WARNING WARNING WARNING WARNING
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NOT FOR UNDER AGE,

You're kidding me... LOL. XD

okay... first of all, this story is so bizarre and odd. How did you ever think of such an odd idea... The goddamned censors are so annoying!#!# But the idea is simply brilliant. You leave me wondering what kind of odd brain you have... I like how the author, fans, and others are incorporated into the story. But this story is weird. Definitely. Hotaru is so awesome. You made me laugh in so many parts. Especially the "mini-ruka" part. There were some mistakes, but I really liked the story. However, the sudden change from not-bolded writing, to bolded-writing was sort of weird and out-of-place. Was that intentional? Because I tried to see if the bolded part had any significance. At first I thought it was just the fight, but it continued...? I don't understand why it was bolded... Hopefully you can clarify that.

(btw, i loved the rock-paper-scissors bit>< classic) x3 You rock~! It'd be nice if you wrote more of yaoi once in a while. But please update your Hotaru's Dream/Sleep Experiment story!!

like it...

omg! this is so funny! HAHAHAHAHA! I'm adding this fic to my C2 archive! love it! XD

Hahaha! This is the funniest M-rated story (safest) I've ever read! I'm getting a stomach ache ferom laughing so hard!1

Nice fic...

HAHA, loved this story! Every thing's censored! It's the safest M rated story i ever read! Thank you!

~sakurapetal246

liked the part you said how much excitement ruka was havung there... ha... mini-ruka & amanatsu...

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(")_(") Eyes hurt... Story... too... long... But... Okay... >:]

Please READ... 'In dilemma, but in love' and 'We'll always be together'

OMG! I couldn't stop laughing. This was so funny, but it was also very cute. Awesome job!

OMG! I loved the part when they were fighting! And Natsume picking his nose! LOL!!

That was really
Funny
Great
Awesome
Extraordinary
and all the good adjectives available...
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CENSORS! XD I loved this!

HAHAHAHAHAHAH!! My sides are splitting from this story! this is defnite parody and i love it! haha...its so cute yet so...not for little kiddies! hahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahaha...its anything but subtle and dats why i love it!