I loved the whole eyebrow and eyeball weird scene with Hotaru and Ruka! That made my day!

OMFG COOL!

woah! I really appreciate this random story you've made. random because of OOC-ness hahaha! aaand, i like this because this certainly shows that an author can write anything they would want, in a good way with so much humor!- how i wish i'm one of the readers out there who were hiding behind the bushes, lolxD this is one heck of an imaginative story! full of humor and well, certainly parody. haha, yeah. humor humor humor)))) lol and all i do is laugh, read then lol then read then rofl and so on)) moreover, hotaru's and ruka's eyes were so creepy! i have imagined it too! scarrry! *hides* hahaha))) um, so gonna read your other one shots out there! seeya!- well, not literally though *sweatdrops* hahaha)))

lol lol lol funniest thing i've ever read, LITERALLY! I mean i've never even thought of something like that XD i think people now appreciate life not being censored!

And PERSONA! XD

-Failed sex attempts.

-Gay Persona.

-And odd Raging hormones

hahahahaahahahaha longest review I've ever written that didn't say "Great story, continue?"

Just hilarious!

The first time I started reading this, I stopped sometime during the Ruka part. This time, though, I read it all the way through. Hilarious. Wonderful parody. Also, the bit about Persona really was wrong. I completely agree with the person who yelled out "This is just so wrong!" It was REALLY wrong...although, it's an interesting coupling. I like writing stories with interesting couplings. Might I use it, if it's okay with you (after all, you did give me the idea...)? Also, if it's either this or yaoi, I choose yaoi, please - (no offense to your story, but it left me wanting to read...okay, it made me want to read GA erotica, happy? So, as yaoi wouldn't have made me want to read a GA lemon, but would have instead BEEN a GA lemon...with two guys, no less...obviously, yaoi is my choice -) Anyway, hilarious. You should write an actual lemon. I think you'd be pretty good at it. Or yaoi. Dunno if you'd be good at that. Also, I love all the different quotes about sex. Especially Robin Williams' quote. "See, the problem is that God gives men a brain and a penis, and only enough blood to run one at a time." Priceless. And true. I know lots of guys who's brains don't work because they're horny all the time. So stupid. Did you know that the term "horny" came from the Elizabethan era? Shakespeare actually used the term as a pun in A Midsummer Night's Dream. Just a tidbit of trivia there - Anyway, loved the fic and am adding it to favorites. YOU SHOULD WRITE A LEMON!

Excellent, I can't say anything but excellent.

I kneel down and worship you... This fic is so good damn funny and out of wack...I especially love the part when everyone thought natsu and ruka were going to kill each other...the rock-paper-scissor part was just FUNNY!Persona dancing his ass off will forever be ingraved in my image of ruka scratching his blonde haired armpits and natsu picking his nose is just sooo WRONG AND DISTURBING! There were soo many parts to this fic that made me want to laugh so hard, tears came out of my eyes..I've never seen a brain a twisted as yours,and all I can say is ROCK ON DUDE!

MJ

[Ruka shrugged and avoided the invisible daggers Natsume shot at him. "Nothing. I just wanted to make lo…llipops with her," he answered, looking as innocent as he could.

Natsume crossed his arms and shook his head. Lollipops?

"Right," he said, unconvinced.

Ruka decided to change the subject. "The sun sure is shining more brightly today, isn't it?" he uttered.

"I guess so. I never tried looking at it. Did you?"]

I laughed aloud at that one. Wonderful story and very humorous. I loved all of it. You're really good at this. Writing humor is hard and I can see you have great talent in that department, particularly in writing witty, humorous lines and also in creating extremely funny scenes. You could actually write a very good screenplay for a parody movie with all these skills. I just looked up your profile. Its sad that you won't be posting anymore fanfics cause I really loved this work of yours and was hoping for more. I'm adding you to my favorite authors along with this story. If you ever decide to come back here and write again and may happen to read this, know that you have someone who will be extremely happy to read your work and post feedbacks for it. Thanks for uploading such a wonderful story!

I was like "What the hell is a vulva?" Then I went to wikipedia.

Thanks.

I needed that.

Really.

Kya

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NOT FOR UNDER AGE,

You're kidding me... LOL. XD

okay... first of all, this story is so bizarre and odd. How did you ever think of such an odd idea... The goddamned censors are so annoying!#!# But the idea is simply brilliant. You leave me wondering what kind of odd brain you have... I like how the author, fans, and others are incorporated into the story. But this story is weird. Definitely. Hotaru is so awesome. You made me laugh in so many parts. Especially the "mini-ruka" part. There were some mistakes, but I really liked the story. However, the sudden change from not-bolded writing, to bolded-writing was sort of weird and out-of-place. Was that intentional? Because I tried to see if the bolded part had any significance. At first I thought it was just the fight, but it continued...? I don't understand why it was bolded... Hopefully you can clarify that.

(btw, i loved the rock-paper-scissors bit classic) x3 You rock! It'd be nice if you wrote more of yaoi once in a while. But please update your Hotaru's Dream/Sleep Experiment story!

like it...

omg! this is so funny! HAHAHAHAHA! I'm adding this fic to my C2 archive! love it! XD

Hahaha! This is the funniest M-rated story (safest) I've ever read! I'm getting a stomach ache ferom laughing so hard!1