Oh that was beautiful! I know what you mean by Piknim's death striking one so deeply. I admit it I cried for her. She and Craklyn were brave to go and face those birds. Congratulations on your first fan-poetry. It is a success in my eyes, and in the eyes of Piknim.

This is really great! I feel exactly the sme way.

That was so sweet! It's true that Piknim's death was a real blow to me too. That was one of the most heartfelt deaths.

It sounds like one of those epic poems that medieval poets would sing about - troubadours. About a young maiden who sacrificed her life to save her friends' - the sort of thing that Eleanor of Aquitaine would listen to and approve of. It was brilliant, especially if it was your first fanpoem.

That was so beautiful and so sweet. Thank you so very much. I was very sad when she died that I went around in a daze for a few days after she died. I never thought of making a peom for her (I'm not very good at making peoms, that's probably why) but I'm glad someone did. :)

quite sad