Ooh...your portayal of Misa is unique, and I like the complexity of your prose. Good work.

Wow, I'm not even sure what to say about this, since it so good. Very detailed, the words are flowing. And the last one, telepathy again, was the best. A height rivaling Raito's. My favorite part, since it made me realize whose dream she was in. Brilliant, really.

Kyaa.. Watch me rip down every post I've ever made. T,T This is beautiful. I think as a fan, I was supposed to know that the other one was from this... ahem. Anyway. I really loved the lips rimmed in sugar. It's like, pssh, yeah, that's got L written allover it. XD Oh, yay, L is definitely lovelovelove, kyaa I'm so happy.

Uhm, oh, yeah, I saw a mistake. :beats self: No, it's true. Under Aquarium Steps, you have 'his old one is hard to mistaken.' But it's totally negated where you put determined and deterred SIDE BY SIDE YOU CHILD PRODIGY like ehh it made me think of how there's so many words like that. Y'know, that sound so similar but are damn near opposites. It makes for really cool and ironic alliteration 'n **. Er, stuff. Am I allowed to curse in a review? Are these things supposed to be children-rated? o.O

Anyway, I still love you. You're still my hero. Go fix the only mistaken you ever did make. hahhaahah XD ohh what a bad pun.

~AO

This was lovely. Brilliant work.

Wow. You sure have good vocabulary. *_* I envy you. I think it is well-written in the very descriptive kinda way.

Oh, wow. It's pretty rare to come across such lovely writing; this is definitely something I've been looking for. Excellent style and tone, beautiful imagery, and an intriguing concept ... e, you've made me v. happy. :D

Also, your Misa is win. Yes.

Vivid is the word at comes to mind to describe this overall. While most fics focus the subtle, this pulses with life, allowing the reader to get a brilliant view of just how Misa's mind works and how strong her emotions run. Given how vibrant exterior self is, it makes perfect sense that her inner self would match.

Wow, that came off sounding remarkably pretentious of me, didn't it? It was all complementary though, for what it's worth.

that was so sad! i really really loved this. you had such an interesting story structure... but was misa really l in those dreams? anyways, incredible story :)