short, but sweet...I like it! You should really consider writing longer stories. If your short stories are this good, I can only imagine what you could do with a long one.

Good. Well-written. Contemplative. I liked it.

Good writing, but not much really happens, does it? That's not a bad thing for a little piece of insight like this, you understand, but something to keep in mind when you graduate to longer fics. Also, I found a couple of the paragraph breaks to be odd, particularly from the first to the second. I can understand wanting to seperate the idea of House being in his place from the description of where he actually is, but it just added an unnecessary pause to the proceedings of this fic. Short, but like I said, good writing. I'll be looking forward to more of your work in the future.