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vrykolakas Princess
2009-09-20 . chapter 27
kyakya i want more!
vrykolakas Princess
2009-09-20 . chapter 25
ah that made me cry!
vrykolakas Princess
2009-09-19 . chapter 16
NO>>_<<
vrykolakas Princess
2009-09-19 . chapter 15
lmfao even TSUNADE!lmao ahahahahah i like this story!
vrykolakas Princess
2009-09-19 . chapter 4
teeheehee
vrykolakas Princess
2009-09-19 . chapter 2
lmao i like it!it is different!! lol
Janne
2009-07-03 . chapter 27
Jeez, I just read your whole story again and it keeps getting better! :D (like noticing things I didn't notice the first time...)

When are you going to upload another chapter? *grin* I'm waiting here! XD
Nah, take your time... But make sure that there's gonna be at least some kind of fluff... :D (even a teeny, tiny bit?? )
And what's going on between shikamaru and temari?? Did he just say that, or is he really into temari too?? I'm confused! ;n; XD
akatsukigirl1230
2009-06-30 . chapter 23
So you mean her hair is cut like Rena Ryuuguu from Higurashi? Cause how you described her hair is kinda how Rena's is cut. Her hair is short in the back, but gets longer as it gets to the front. Here's an example:

http://gigazine.jp/img/2009/02/20/higurasi_jan/rena_kao.jpg
the holy see
2009-06-15 . chapter 20
loved it. there really aren't enough shikamaru/oc stories out there that are any good.

hope to see an update soon.
Janne! :)
2009-04-09 . chapter 27
An awesome chapter! I'm so glad everything worked out fine for the clan... *relieved sigh*

Keep up the great work! :)
SoundzofSilence
2009-04-06 . chapter 27
Now what? That saga is over, so is Dani going to concentrate on trying to find a way back home or is she going to email her family or something?

Man I've missed this fanfic. It's actually well-written and has proper grammer, and a fresh plot to boot! Please don't discontinue this one!
Repentless Wind
2009-03-18 . chapter 27
Okay, so I feel really bad because I've read 27 chapters of this story, and I don't think I've reveiwed any of them, so I'm gonna do that now. I really enjoy this story, and I really like Dani. I especially liked this recent saga for some reason...don't really know why, I just do. Your descriptions are really good. And Shikamaru being jealous was just priceless. Oh...and b/c I can't remember, what is Dani's eye color? I know, really random question, but I just can't seem to remember. Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!

Repentless Wind
Sybil Corvax
2009-03-12 . chapter 27
awesome! Please try to update soon!
TaruGalateia
2009-03-12 . chapter 27
ARIGATO!
-cheers really loudly-
Thanks so much for the update. I was half expecting them to live in Konoha, or at least Kai kissing Dani on the mouth, not the cheek. It would so make Shikamaru totally jealous, though she probably won't see Kai again. Oh, I so want that to happen. But, I think I would rather have Shikamaru kiss her. It would be her first kiss, right? Still... I'd laugh if it was someone else just to bug Shikamaru or something. XD
Dragon260
2009-03-11 . chapter 27
Haha, nice one Kai, going for a homey-type of gal. :3
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