 vrykolakas Princess 2009-09-20 . chapter 27kyakya i want more! |
 vrykolakas Princess 2009-09-20 . chapter 25ah that made me cry! |
 vrykolakas Princess 2009-09-19 . chapter 16NO>>_<< |
 vrykolakas Princess 2009-09-19 . chapter 15lmfao even TSUNADE!lmao ahahahahah i like this story! |
 vrykolakas Princess 2009-09-19 . chapter 4teeheehee |
 vrykolakas Princess 2009-09-19 . chapter 2lmao i like it!it is different!! lol |
 Janne 2009-07-03 . chapter 27 Jeez, I just read your whole story again and it keeps getting better! :D (like noticing things I didn't notice the first time...)
When are you going to upload another chapter? *grin* I'm waiting here! XD
Nah, take your time... But make sure that there's gonna be at least some kind of fluff... :D (even a teeny, tiny bit?? )
And what's going on between shikamaru and temari?? Did he just say that, or is he really into temari too?? I'm confused! ;n; XD |
 akatsukigirl1230 2009-06-30 . chapter 23So you mean her hair is cut like Rena Ryuuguu from Higurashi? Cause how you described her hair is kinda how Rena's is cut. Her hair is short in the back, but gets longer as it gets to the front. Here's an example:
http://gigazine.jp/img/2009/02/20/higurasi_jan/rena_kao.jpg |
 the holy see 2009-06-15 . chapter 20loved it. there really aren't enough shikamaru/oc stories out there that are any good.
hope to see an update soon. |
 Janne! :) 2009-04-09 . chapter 27 An awesome chapter! I'm so glad everything worked out fine for the clan... *relieved sigh*
Keep up the great work! :) |
 SoundzofSilence 2009-04-06 . chapter 27Now what? That saga is over, so is Dani going to concentrate on trying to find a way back home or is she going to email her family or something?
Man I've missed this fanfic. It's actually well-written and has proper grammer, and a fresh plot to boot! Please don't discontinue this one! |
 Repentless Wind 2009-03-18 . chapter 27Okay, so I feel really bad because I've read 27 chapters of this story, and I don't think I've reveiwed any of them, so I'm gonna do that now. I really enjoy this story, and I really like Dani. I especially liked this recent saga for some reason...don't really know why, I just do. Your descriptions are really good. And Shikamaru being jealous was just priceless. Oh...and b/c I can't remember, what is Dani's eye color? I know, really random question, but I just can't seem to remember. Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
Repentless Wind |
 Sybil Corvax 2009-03-12 . chapter 27awesome! Please try to update soon! |
 TaruGalateia 2009-03-12 . chapter 27 ARIGATO!
-cheers really loudly-
Thanks so much for the update. I was half expecting them to live in Konoha, or at least Kai kissing Dani on the mouth, not the cheek. It would so make Shikamaru totally jealous, though she probably won't see Kai again. Oh, I so want that to happen. But, I think I would rather have Shikamaru kiss her. It would be her first kiss, right? Still... I'd laugh if it was someone else just to bug Shikamaru or something. XD |
 Dragon260 2009-03-11 . chapter 27Haha, nice one Kai, going for a homey-type of gal. :3 |